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shan8006

The fifty-first is report

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Answer:

The line graph describes the consumption of fish and some different sorts of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

According to the line graph, there are four lines in the graph: chicken, beef, lamb and fish. The chicken consumption in the European country fluctuated increased through those 25 years. More precisely, in 1979, about 140 grams of chicken were consumed. Then, the line grew to just under 250 in 2004. Unlike chicken, the beef line was fluctuated dipped. To be more precise, there around 220 grams of beef every person consumed per week in 1979. After that, the line fluctuated dipped to about 100 grams in 2004. In terms of lamb, like beef, it also fluctuated declined. More exactly, the line started at just over 150 grams in 1979. Then, it fluctuated declined to around 60 grams in 2004. The fish is unlike others, it always stabilised around 50 grams via 25 years.

Summarily, as we can be clearly seen from the line graph that in 1979, the beef consumption was the highest and in 2004, chicken replaced beef to become the highest, whereas fish always was the lowest consumption from 1979 to 2004.

SpringThunder

谢谢分享！

netfox1983

楼主加油，看到你的帖子，我相信你一定可以成功

shan8006

原帖由 netfox1983 于 27-2-2011 13:10 发表

                               
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楼主加油，看到你的帖子，我相信你一定可以成功

谢谢鼓励

shan8006

The fifty-second essay and report

Some people believe that there should be fixed pinishments for each type of crime. Others, houever, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Answer:

As crime rate has increasingly high in human society in this day and age, some people think that penalties should be fixed for each type of criminal acts. However, other people discuss punishment decision should take criminal circumstances and motivation into account.

Indeed, fixing penalties might be fairer to some criminals who just committed a misdemeanour. For instance, an offender who committed a petty crime such as stole bread should not be punished stringently. By contrast, a felon criminal or hardened criminal cannot just be educated instead of harsh penalty. Thus, it seems to punish criminals should depend on their criminal acts.

However, criminal circumstances and motivation also should be taken into account. For example, a housewife committed a felony because she has killed her husband. But, it she always live in domestic violence and no one could help her, she should not be punished stringently because it might not be reasonable and unfair. Likewise, a mother participated in a raid just because her children had had nothing to eat over three days. Thus, push this mother to harsh penalty might be cruel.

Personally, I think that to consider how to punish the criminals might not just depend on the types of offences but should synthesise the criminal circumstances and motivation as well. Punishment means that to let people face the mistakes what they have done and reform them to avoid committing again. Since everyone might make some mistakes. Some are slight, some are severe and some are out of their control. Therefore, it is improper that to harsh punish the law-abiding people who committed mistakes due to some unavoidable causes.

Summarily, in my view, as the reason I mentioned above, to punish criminals should consider not only the criminal acts themselves but also the criminal circumstances and criminal motivation.

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Report

The diagram below shows how The Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Answer:

The process diagram illustrates how The Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-date information on the weather for the sake of producing reliable forecasts.

According to the process diagram, in order to broadcast weather forecasts that need through four periods : incoming information, anylysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and finally broadcast. More precisely, at first, the incoming information is collected by satellite, radar and drifting buoy. At the next step, experts start to analysise and forecast the weather condition via satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic charts received from satellite, radar and drifting buoy. After that, the weather forecasts information is inputted into computer thereby preparing to broadcast. Finally, the information is broadcast so the public can receive the weather forecasts by TV, radio and phone (recorded announcement).

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from process diagram that how weather information is collected, analysised, prepared and broadcast.

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pettie

真的很佩服楼主的毅力
你一定会成功的！

shan8006

原帖由 pettie 于 27-2-2011 15:04 发表

                               
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真的很佩服楼主的毅力
你一定会成功的！

谢谢 ，但貌似越接近考试越没有信心了。

DANTE

LZ，我虽然只看过你最后的那片大作文，我发现你好喜欢用不定式作主语哟~~~~还有个问题就是你的句式比较单调，几乎看不到从句或者分词作定语，有些句子还是有语法错误的。但是我觉得你现在大致的结构还是清晰和正确的~~

shan8006

原帖由 DANTE 于 27-2-2011 21:18 发表

                               
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LZ，我虽然只看过你最后的那片大作文，我发现你好喜欢用不定式作主语哟~~~~还有个问题就是你的句式比较单调，几乎看不到从句或者分词作定语，有些句子还是有语法错误的。但是我觉得你现在大致的结构还是清晰和正确的 ...

谢谢楼上兄弟的意见。
那篇大作文是掐时间写在纸上然后再打到电脑里。发觉用纸写和用电脑写真的是感觉太不同了，写作灵感也和在电脑上写不同，很紧张，字又写得慢。看来还是要用写的练习才是王道。
给烤鸭的同学们提个醒，一定要在纸上练作文啊。

shan8006

The fifty-third essay and report

Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what exent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

As increasing institutions and individuals have paid much attention to students' education in this day and age, some people think schools should focus on students' academic education for the benefit of their future careers, whereas other subjects like music and sports are useless.

Undoubtedly, schools focus on teaching students the academic subjects definitely can benefit their future career. More precisely, academic subjects can endue students with strong theoretical foundations for the sake of preparing or adjusting themselves to the adaptive phase of future careers rapidly. Likewise, students also might learn new things fast due to their firm academic base acquired by academic education. Additionally, whether graduates can find decent jobs is to some extent depends on their diploma levels and subjects in present-day society. Therefore, academic subjects seem to play a vital role in students' future careers.

However, other subjects such as music and sports are also important to students' future occupations. First and foremost, some students might find their really interests and talent via those subjects. For instance, students who are adept at football or piano might acquire confidence and interests through sports and music courses. Subsequently, those courses might change their future occupational plans and might mould some excellent sports stars and musicians. Furthermore, sports courses can strengthen students' physical qualities and music can mould their character and emotion as well. Those nice qualities are also important to graduates' future careers.

Summarily, academic subjects endue students with firm theoretical academic foundations and they can acquire nice qualities via other subjects such as sports and music. Thus, in my view, I disagree with subjects except academic subjects are useless but both academic subjects and other subjects are all beneficial to students' future careers.

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Report

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Answer:

The map of Garlsdon illustrates two possible sites for a new supermarket for the town.

According to the map, the first possible site is located in countryside and on the north-western border of Garlsdon. In terms of transportation, there are one railway and one main road near the site.

We can see from the map that the second site is situated in town centre. By contrast, although there are three main roads and a railway near the centre, but the centre itself is a no traffic zone.

As shown in the map, theoretically, the second site seems s convenient position because not only can inhabitants of town reach the supermarket easily, but also the customers from the neighboured towns (Hindon, Bransdon and Cransdon) can drive to supermarket via three main roads. But, realistically, the second site lies in the no traffic area. That means all the car cannot drive in this area. Likewise, because of city centre, it might be less parking nearby. In contrast, even though the first site is located in countryside and customers should drive longer distance reaching the supermarket, but there might be sufficient ground for parking. Therefore, the first site is better than the second site to building supermarket.

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dracula51

很早就看你的帖子，加油，兄弟，

shan8006

The fifty-fourth essay

Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion.

Answer:

As human society has developed rapidly in this day and ages, which groups of people have the greatest influence on the world has become a frequent topic of discussion. Some people believe those are politicians whereas others think those are scientists.

Admittedly, politicians' decisions might influence the world greatly. More precisely, in particular some advanced countries, politicians who are peace-loving or aggressive might decide the world in peace or in war. That is best illustrated with the example of Fascism. Hitler was a cruel leader and his expansionist policy made the Second World War erupted. As a consequence, the trauma of the war has extended from that generation to current generation and might be continuing in many of countries. By contrast, some peace-loving politicians might benefit the world in whole. For instance, Chinese leader DengXiaoping opened Chinese door in 1979. Consequently, not only might majority of countries benefit from that policy because of abundant Chinese natural and human resources, but also that has expanded Chinese's outlook and allowed them travelling to foreign countries for tour or business.

However, the world changes are also contributed by scientists a lot. Exactly, the people on this planet have hugely benefited from scientists' inventions. For example, the lamps make evening not dark any more; the aeroplanes enable people travelling around world; the spaceships send people out of space. As a matter of fact, almost every inventions created by scientists might bring the world to the new era. Currently, the technological development is equal to the strength and status of a nation in the world. In other words, scientists have played a vital role in national development, even world development.

Summarily, politicians and scientists are all greatly influence the world. Personally, it is hardly to compare both of them which have more influence on the world.

shan8006

原帖由 dracula51 于 2-3-2011 03:07 发表

                               
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很早就看你的帖子，加油，兄弟，

多谢鼓励

shan8006

The fifty-fifth is report

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Answer:

Chorleywood is a village adjacent to London and its population has increased stably since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map describes the development of the village from 1868 to 1994.

According to the map, the development of Chorleywood experienced four stages. More precisely, initially, from 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood just has a small area and only two main roads  were close to the village. After that, the village extended southward and the size of the new area almost doubled of initial village from 1883 to 1922. In this period, a railway has been built in 1909 and a railway station (Chorleywood Station) has been established in the village centre. Over the third period (1922 - 1970), the village expanded along with the south of railway. Finally, between 1970 and 1994, the new area was built at east of the village. In 1970, a motorway was accomplished cross the new area and connected to the northern main road.

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the map that the area of Chorleywood increased stably and its means of transportation developed from 1868 to 1994.

shan8006

惨不忍睹我的口语啊。。。

The fifty-sixth essay

Nowadays, distance-learning programs are such common things for us (the study material by post, by Internet), but some people argue that courses can never be taken as good as those by attending in a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

As human technology has developed rapidly in this day and age,students can get study material via distance-learning programs such as email, Internet and so on. Subsequently,some people discuss that those courses are not better than lectures in colleges and universities.

Indeed, distance-learning programs obviously has inherent advantages against traditional lectures in colleges and universities. More precisely, teachers and students can teach and study theoretically everywhere every time through Internet or email. By that, teachers can put their study material on Internet, whereas students can learn and review the courses after school. Furthermore, students always could ask their tutors questions about courses via email when they at home, while tutors can also give them response by the same way. However, even though distance education is quite convenient, but it might not replace traditional lecture currently.

Likewise, traditional education plays an important role in students' education yet as well. First and foremost, traditional lecture would endue students with not only academic knowledge itself but also social experience. Because students can communicate with their classmates when they at school. Additionally, universities' and colleges' disciplines might regulate students thereby ensuring them going to school. In contrast, distance education might not enforce students to study at such important ages. Consequently, they might stop learning but do other things they interested.

Summarily, in my view, it is hardly to compare which pedagogical methodology is better, distance education or traditional education. Because both two methodologies all have numbers of advantages and all play important roles in students' education.

crystali99

闪动，19号你在哪考试？上海？

yrqin

As human technology has developed [->has been developing/is developing] rapidly in this day and age,students can get study material[s] via distance-learning programs such as email, Internet and so on. Subsequently[->However],some people discuss[->argue.discuss怪怪的] that those courses are not better than lectures in colleges and universities.

Indeed, distance-learning programs obviously has[->have] inherent advantages against traditional lectures in colleges and universities. More precisely, teachers and students can teach and study theoretically[->这句话不通，直接说teachers teach students theories就可以了吧？] everywhere every time[->anywhere and  anytime] through Internet or email. By that, teachers can put their study[->course] material on Internet, whereas students can learn and review the courses after school. Furthermore, students always could[->could easily] ask their tutors questions about courses via email when they [are] at home, while tutors can also give them response by[->in] the same way. However, even though distance education is quite convenient, but [删掉] it might not replace traditional lecture currently.

Likewise, traditional [way of] education plays an important role in students' education[->] yet[->yet含否定意思，用still更好] as well. First and foremost, traditional lecture would endue students with not only academic knowledge itself but also social experience. Because[->because应该带从句，而不是另起一句] students can communicate with their classmates when they at school. Additionally, universities' and colleges' disciplines might regulate students thereby ensuring them going to school. In contrast, distance education might not enforce students to study at such important ages. Consequently, they might stop learning but[->and] do other things they [are] interested [in].

Summarily, in my view, it is hardly[->hard] to compare[->determine] which pedagogical methodology is better, distance education or traditional education. Because[->because 同理应该带从句，而不是另起一句] both two[删掉] methodologies all[删掉] have numbers of advantages and all[->both] play important roles in students' education.

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shan8006

原帖由 crystali99 于 9-3-2011 19:22 发表

                               
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闪动，19号你在哪考试？上海？

茉莉姐^_^，我19号在上海考试，口语提前了，17或18号。现在拼命搞口语ing...

shan8006

原帖由 yrqin 于 9-3-2011 20:33 发表

                               
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As human technology has developed [->has been developing/is developing] rapidly in this day and age,students can get study material via distance-learning programs such as email, Internet and so on. ...

太及时了，好多我都是习惯性错误了，十分感谢

ymxyjshk

赞成楼主的坚持！！非常佩服！！~~

希望楼主继续坚持下去！！！

ymxyjshk

楼主，好几天没来了，不知道是否坚持下去了吗？

leciel95

看完楼主的勤奋...突然觉得俺努力不够...ps 手机上不了freeoz了...

narcsity

不知闪动19日发挥如何？

sunsea

楼主加油啊～～希望最后考到4个7及以上！！！

hjx500

希望一举成功~

xiaojia

楼上英语太牛了，

sevennior

同楼上，同楼上楼上

shan8006

不好意思，让大家失望了。
3-19日考试失败 6 L6.5 R7 W6 S5
然后闭关修行。。。。
11-4-16四鸭又失败 6.5 L6 R7 W6.5 S5.5
复议中。。。
但基本上赶在新政前提交申请也来不及了。等待7/1后吧。
成绩上还是能让我看到曙光的。继续努力。

shan8006

恭喜，你终于修成正果了^_^

viphi

LZ，这次的成绩一定要复议啊，作文口语一起复议，你作文分高，说不定能带动考官觉得口语分打低了，就算口语不过，作文再提高0.5也能拿回900块，具体看我签名，5.5必须要复议！

同时积极准备下一次考试吧，就差一点运气了，下次一定行！