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发表于 21-3-2011 13:32:13 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

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考前找6分的作文想看看什么个样子,不是很好找。
319最终得了6分的作文,需要的同学拿去做个参考吧。
---------Nowadays, it is likely that people more and more work at home and children more and more study at home, since computer technology become cheaper and accessible.
Do you think it is a positive or negative development?----------

Recently, the computer technology become cheaper and more user friendly; as a result people more and more chose to work or study at household. Whether this changing does good for or poses a threat upon the society has aroused considerable controversy. Before presenting my own view, I intent to probe both side of this argument.

Some people claim that this changing is beneficial to the society. To begin with, working and studying at home, people get opportunities to relax both physically and psychologically. There is no denying that home is the best place to bring individuals convenience and satisfaction which make people work and study increasingly effectively. Moreover, working and studying at home gives people more time to spend with their families and to enjoy leisure time, which contribute to individual's metal health and increase their life quality. Furthermore, working or studying at home enables people to escape from deteriorating air, irritating noisy and serious traffic jam which they may be suffering everyday.

However, others hold that this development exert detrimental impact upon the society, For one thing, working and studying at home reduce the mutual communication between each other, which usually leads to the feeling of self-centred and isolated, especially for the young in their formative years. For another thing, those who work or study at home always live sedentary life, which definitely do harm to individual's health.

In conclusion, it is true that this development has both positive and negative effect. Personally, I side with the view that this development is beneficial to the society as a whole. We cannot emphasize the importance of this development too much.9

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发表于 21-3-2011 13:33:20 | 只看该作者
哇~好名字啊
借你的名字沾下好运气!
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 楼主| 发表于 21-3-2011 13:39:28 | 只看该作者
大家同福同福啊,4个6啊 4个7啊的 都快来吧
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 楼主| 发表于 15-4-2011 12:39:54 | 只看该作者
自己顶一下,顺便求G3进度飞奔
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发表于 15-4-2011 12:45:42 | 只看该作者
多谢楼主
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发表于 15-4-2011 13:05:36 | 只看该作者
楼主没有4个6就E-lodge了?
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发表于 15-4-2011 14:29:36 | 只看该作者
楼主为何是先lodge175再烤鸭?副申?
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发表于 15-4-2011 17:44:53 | 只看该作者
希望会过拉~~好紧张阿!!!
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 楼主| 发表于 15-4-2011 18:10:15 | 只看该作者

回复 #6 heb30 的帖子

偶老婆主申,我复申,我只需要贡献partner skill的5分。所以可以后补雅思~

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 楼主| 发表于 15-4-2011 18:10:53 | 只看该作者

回复 #7 herewego 的帖子

没错
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