请各位指正一下我的Cover Letter，小弟拜谢~~~

waterforce

马上就要登陆了，面对这个陌生的环境，心里十分忐忑，希望可以很快找到工作，稳定下来。

今天下午没事，写了一个Cover Letter，希望各位大大帮忙看看，有没有catch住你们的眼球，如果有什么不好的地方，希望各位大大可以指出，小弟在此拜谢~~~~~

XXXX
111 Creek Street,
South Brisbane QLD 4101

21 July 2010

Dear HR manager,

Having sound experience as a Senior QA\Test Lead, I would like to express my interest in the XXX position advertised on seek website on the DATE.

I have more than 6 years experience in software development filed both in Microsoft and IBM, have sound experience with Automation testing, Performance analyse, team management and other related tasks in QA fields. I am very experienced using a wide range of computer skill and highly flexible attitude to gain new knowledge.

I would be very happy to meet with you at a time of your convenience and my best contact number is 0423 000 000.

Yours sincerely

XXXXX

seabookf_91

很遗憾 完全没有， 我们要细节， 你没有细节的东西， 比如说 你精通 LP,  Selenium, Cruise Control.
我把我自己的cover letter 贴出来， 大家一起指正。

Cover Letter

Hello, I am very well experienced in Java. Actually, I've been doing Java for nearly 5 years. Very familiar with JSP, Servlet, XML, JDBC, HTML all these basic skills as well as some famous open source frameworks such as Spring, Struts and Hibernate. In the leisure time, I’d like to explore the latest new flashy tech happened in the world such as Iphone’s Objective-C and Google android System. I’ve implemented several Google android applications by my own.
Also I was a senior Quality Engineer in eBay before, which has the most beautiful and stringent testing process in the world I believe. I am quite proud of myself to get survived in eBay. Very familiar with Unix and Linux, most of my previous projects are developed or deployed under Linux or Unix. Good oral and written English and good communication skills.
I am 100% confident about my ability and you will find me more if you just only need to give me one interview chance. Trust me and I won’t let you down. Thanks.

呜噜

原帖由 seabookf_91 于 21-7-2010 18:25 发表

                               
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很遗憾 完全没有， 我们要细节， 你没有细节的东西， 比如说 你精通 LP,  Selenium, Cruise Control.
我把我自己的cover letter 贴出来， 大家一起指正。

Cover Letter

Hello, I am very well experienced i ...

我觉得格式和句子组织还可以改进一下

呜噜

原帖由 waterforce 于 21-7-2010 16:43 发表

                               
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马上就要登陆了，面对这个陌生的环境，心里十分忐忑，希望可以很快找到工作，稳定下来。

今天下午没事，写了一个Cover Letter，希望各位大大帮忙看看，有没有catch住你们的眼球，如果有什么不好的地方，希望各位大 ...

结构可以了，具体内容最好跟申请的job description上一条一条match

呜噜

找了3月工作了, 每天改cover letter要吐了

老大卫

I am eager to expand on this letter in an interview. Please do not hesitate to contact me via email at *** or via phone ****

其他差不多了，按照广告改几个关键技术词就好。

关键是打电话跟踪！

shurman

google 一下 "cover letter of "software engineer", or "programmer" or xxxxxxx.
对比修改一下,比自己瞎写好多了.

somelb

太短了~~而且都是I开头哈哈~
不过楼主把Microsoft & IBM一抬，可能就不需要多废话了哈哈

NEUTRAL

太短了。
cover letter别一封包打天下。一个职位一封，跟jd写的一模一样。
写差不多一页A4纸吧。

somelb

我很赞同，发觉真的每个职位都要改~

my_dream

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太短了。
cover letter别一封包打天下。一个职位一封，跟jd写的一模一样。
写差不多一页A4纸吧。

cover letter要写一页A4纸，太夸张了吧？

pinxinge

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cover letter要写一页A4纸，太夸张了吧？

我也感觉写满太夸张了，有精华的部分，一两点就足够啦。
另外，也不一定非要和JD完全一样吧，突出自己的强点就好啦。

冰峰

还是很迷糊，到底是写general的东东，还是更detailed的经验和技能呢？。。。

8戒

冰峰 发表于 3-5-2014 10:16

                               
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还是很迷糊，到底是写general的东东，还是更detailed的经验和技能呢？。。。

COVER LETTER应该是让雇主有兴趣看你的简历。非常重要！！如果COVER LETTER不过关，基本上希望不大，这是我的理解。我一般都是只留头尾中间全部重写。倒是简历相对简单，随便根据广告上的要求修改一下。

冰峰

8戒 发表于 3-5-2014 16:47

                               
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COVER LETTER应该是让雇主有兴趣看你的简历。非常重要！！如果COVER LETTER不过关，基本上希望不大，这 ...

多谢，继续改CL中。。。

symeteor

这个cover letter和没写一样，

I have more than 6 years experience in software development filed both in Microsoft and IBM, have sound experience with Automation testing, Performance analyse, team management and other related tasks in QA fields. I am very experienced using a wide range of computer skill and highly flexible attitude to gain new knowledge.

这段话有什么意义？
要用简单明了的话写出你在哪些领域擅长，一般是用bullets标出，列4-5点