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考雅思前一个多月儿子病了，一直折腾到考试前都没好，那段时间一直都没看书。眼看8月22号就要考试了，写作从来没正经看过，一篇也没写过，没办法,花了一天时间，找来老公买的从来没看过的什么万能写作，摘抄了四页纸，匆匆忙忙地就上阵了。听力、阅读、口语成绩都不理想就不交待什么了。因为写作花的时间最短，取得的成绩最好，所以就想把我自己总结的几个段落拿出来给大家分享一下，希望对大家有所帮助。
1.I believe cars have caused many problems in society and we need to reduce the use of the cars.
First of all,we must consider the severe traffic caused by cars.
Another consideration is that cars generate serious pollution.
Cars facilitate our travel and make people’s daily commute much easier than before.However,the adverse effects of cars significantly outweigh the benefits they bring.
推荐理由：这个段落我一看就很喜欢。首先它所用的词都很简单。对于像我这种虽然大学学过几年英语但是水平还停留在高中的水平的人来说，要记住然后写出类似的语句来比较容易。8.22写作关于小孩成才取决于家长的抚养方式，我就照搬了中间的两段中心句。其次，最后一段也很好，非常适合用于描述某个事物带来的利弊。
2.Any government,whether rich or poor,cannot put every penny into education even though it may be trying to improve overall conditions for educations and to creat much need rewards for teachers.Private school,on the other hand,help to narrow government spending on education by charging wealthy students expensive tuition fees in return for superior learning facilities.That is why the government throughout the world,whether developed or developing,encourage individuals and enterprises to establish private school.
推荐理由：这段话我第一次读到就记住了government,whether rich or poor，whether developed or developing. 还有那句最简单的on the other hand别的读起来都很觉得很拗口。不过我还是稍微背了一下，因为觉得里面的help to narrow…,that is why…,也是比较容易学的句子。这几个我在考试中也用到了。这段也是关于教育类的，可能跟教育沾边的议论文都可以用上点。
3.Firstly,modern people suffer from greater tension so that they have less time to communicate with each other.More and more people are living in urban areas,where life has a quick rhythem.Due to fierce competition,people have to work hard in order to keep up with the pace of the city life.Everybody is busy all the time and the ever increasing pressures at work deprive us of a casual way of life.Moreover,living in apartments in isolated blocks,we are becoming more and more removed from each other.And more often than not,it is no longer convenient for us to meet one another freely.
推荐理由：这段话我也超喜欢，你看从头到尾的词都很简单，读下来完全没有能懂不卡壳。还有就是这段话非常实用，用于描述人们现在所受的压力非常合适。更重要的一点就是这里面的连接词也很丰富。老外不是喜欢连接词嘛，我们就给他们瞧瞧。不管文章写得怎么样，连接词我们是会用的嘛。另外我还加了点必用的词，如下：be essential to,similarly,for example,take sth for instance,consequently,to sum up,respect=suggest=indicate=claim=argue..(这类词太多了，有这些就绰绰有余了)，maximize the positive effects and minimize the negative effects of …,nevertheless,regard…as…,unfortunately,unlikely.
4.I do not believe it is the best or only way to protect the environment.
All world problems,whether it is environmental pollution,war,energy insufficiency,or famine,arise from the abusive behavior of all individuals.Therefore,the solution to all these problems is the need for collective consciousness.What is meant by this is that each individual must be aware of the impact he or she has on the world and their unique part to play in this world.After all,if one is happy with his life,he will surely not harm the environment or anyone else.His behavior will be that of responsible individual.
What is needed,therefore,is education.Education is the key to all problems.Furthermore,education means that children all over the world should be allowed to go to schools with good teachers and where teaching materials and methods can be adapted to each individual.Education means raising children to be responsible invididual.
推荐理由：这段话有些长，不过因为所用的词语简单，所以我还是整段背下来的。里面有好几个万能句，problems,whether it is …or…,what is meant by this is..,what is needed therefore is….整段话纠结于education和individual,觉得挺实用的。
5.As more and more subjects can be taught via the computer,there would seem to be less and less need for teacher to be present,however,computers will never replace teachers because technology is only a tool and can never replace the spiritual element of the teacher.
The computer may communicate concrete knowledge,but only the teachers are able to communicate wisdom,to build self-confidence,and to make one think creatively.
What will happen is that the technology will not replace teachers.It will never replace the teacher,it will only make him or her more important.
推荐理由：还是那句话：简单实用。最后一段话有老外比较推崇的类似中国的排比句，其实也很简单，比较好模仿。
另外，书信的写作，听老公说就是瞎编理由，然后分清是正式的还是非正式的。把上面总结的几个段落都写在打印的王陆807单词后面，又把剑六的两篇书信都撕下来跟807一起带着去考试了。考试当天带着这几张纸，别的也没什么好看的了，就把这些看了几分钟，记了一遍，考试的时候想想哪些可以套上面用。不管是书信还是议论文，再想一下文章的大概结构，每一段的中心思想。结果考了6分。
这个方法比较适合没有时间学习的人。另外，由于英文输入平时根本用不到，所以上面的英文肯定有词打错了，大家就估摸着看吧。祝大家都取得自己满意的写作成绩。
[ 本帖最后由 西新桥畔 于 9-9-2009 14:30 编辑 ] |
发表于 9-9-2009 11:54:13
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