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发表于 17-2-2009 11:42:29 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

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各位好,本人男,学电子的,于上周刚刚登陆阿德,目前正在寻觅工作。以下是我的个人简历,请帮忙提点意见,谢谢
Electronic Maintenance Engineer
Personal Detail                                                                     
Name:          date of birth:
Address:  
Email:   
Phone:   

Summary:                                                                       
Profound ability of trouble-shooting in Barco projectors and Bosch electronic equipments
Strong ability to dismantle and install delicate and complex electronic equipments
Rich applied experience in Barco tuning softwares and Vista softwares
Profound ability to use appropriate tools to repair and test electronic circuits
Familiar with Crestron CTI programming system
Excellent communication skills and customer service experience, and technical supporter
Familiar with the manufacture of transmission interfaces of acoustic signal cable, image signal cable and control signal cable
Experienced in application of MS word, excel, powerpoint.

Experience                                                                     
04/08/2007--02/02/2009      
maintenance engineer for Audio/Video appliances.
Shanghai Gloden bridge information system engineering Co.,ltd
Responsibility:   
Accurately assemble different electronic circuit boards of Barco projectors and mechanic parts together to make projectors working properly.
Perform customer service activities
Adjust and fine-tune projectors to exhibit fantastic vision effect
Locate and fix problems which make projectors work abnormally, either relating to electronic or mechanic problems (such as PMP, CPU and engine spares)
Repair projectors' circuits (mainly concentrate on power supply parts)
Repair and maintain Bosch's monitors and CCTV security systems
Manufacture different kinds of cables used in projects, such as optical interface cable, RCA interface cable, BNC interface cable, RS232 interface cable.

Achievement:                                                                    
Independently analyzing and repairing CCTV systems (Gen4, Gen5 and different kinds of monitors) and Barco projectors ( IQ series, Icon H600, RLM R6+, SLM R12+, and so on)
Doing many business trips to resolve projectors' problems for customers. For example, i went all alone to Hefei Telecom Company, Yunnan Tobacco Company, Chinese satellite monitoring Centre to fix Barco projectors' problems (such as no light output, lack of colour, no response while starting up and so on)
Working as a team member in a project of Shanghai Security Breau, my work was to install and configure six Barco projectors (RLM R6+) together to give perfect projection video display (the total display size on the screen is 10m*2.5m)
Working as technical supporter for sales, providing video presentation and function explanation for potential customers.

30/08/2003--01/07/2007     
Chinese technical school teacher (similar to Australian TAFE school)
NO. 3 technical school of Zhangjiagang, China
Responsibility:
Instruct electronic and electrical theories
Implement and organize students' technical training for Chinese intermediate certificate of electrician
Administer school's public computers, normally fixing computers' hardware and software problems.

Achievement:                                                                    
Administer a class of students (49 persons), taking care of their study, live and so on.
Organizing training of 4 students to attend the programming competition of MCU, and winning the third prize.


Education&Training                                                               
01/09/1999--15/06/2003  Jiangsu teachers university of technology, China
B.A. Electronic information engineering

02/11/2008--21/11/2008  Crestron training institute
Mainly referring to the essential application of CTI system in different audio and video projects.

08/12/2008--10/12/2008  Bosch Repairing Centre (Bosch of China)
Mainly referring to the maintenance of Bosch's  CCTV security system.

[ 本帖最后由 zmkm1302022 于 19-2-2009 10:00 编辑 ]
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发表于 17-2-2009 14:01:44 | 只看该作者
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你等等哈,晚上我回家给你看看撒! 竟然被点名, 太夸张了
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发表于 17-2-2009 15:00:23 | 只看该作者

越俎代苞了,今天在家休假,无聊啊~~~

毕竟隔行如隔山,所以只改了格式和一些英文的表达方式,请斑竹继续。

Resume

Name:                (Your preferred name here, make it easier for “GuiLao” to pronounce)
Email:                (You email)
Mobile:        (0412345678)
         
Working Experience

Aug 2007 to Feb 2009
Shanghai Golden Bridge Information System Engineering Co., Ltd

Working as a maintenance engineer for Audio/Video appliances.

Below are my responsibilities:  
- Customer services
- Setup the Barco projector circuits and mechanic parts for the Audio/Video systems
- Optimize the projectors for the best vision performance
- Locate and fix the problems with projectors, and other electronic or mechanic problems
- Repair projector circuits, mostly for the power supply
- Take care of the Bosch monitoring and CCTV security systems

Aug 03 to Jul 2007

No. 3 Technical School of ZhangjiaGang (A technical training institute in China, similar to TAFE in Australia)

Working as teacher, the major of electronic technology and engineering

Below are my responsibilities:
- Instruct electronic and electrical theories
- Implement and organize the trainings for the students for their Intermediate Certificate of Electrician
- Take care of the computers in the school (including hardware, software and basic networking)

Education and Training

Sept 1999 to Jun 2003
Jiangsu Teachers University of Technology, China
Bachelor of Engineering on Electronic Information

02/11/2008--21/11/2008  
Crestron Training Institute
Training for essential applications of CTI systems in varied Audio/Video systems

08/12/2008--10/12/2008  
Bosch Repairing Centre (Bosch of China)
Training for Bosch CCTV security systems

Others
An excellent team player;
Able to work under pressure;
Strong computer skills
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 楼主| 发表于 17-2-2009 16:16:32 | 只看该作者


哈哈不好意思,偶是helen xing的老公,他说可以来找你帮忙, 所以。。。。
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发表于 17-2-2009 21:32:34 | 只看该作者
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看了, 我觉得你的简历太简单了,长度当COVER LETTER倒差不多。
建议你去参考下简历工作室的样本,然后重写,语法之类的问题慢慢研究。

工程类的简历, 一般包括如下内容,

personal information:
Summary
Professional Skill :
Project management:
Programming language:
Operation System:
Tools:
Others:

Professional ExperienceSummary       
200X.XX– 200X.XX  XXX company n        position

Project Experience

200X.XX– 200X.XX  XXX company
Department       
Project Name  
position
Project Description: Architecture:                                                                                                                                                 Main Technology:
Tools:                                                                                                                                                            
Responsibility: Achievement:
.......
Education        1998 – 2002 B.E., XX university
Reference        References available on request
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 楼主| 发表于 17-2-2009 22:44:50 | 只看该作者
谢谢 ,我回去好好做功课。
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 楼主| 发表于 19-2-2009 09:05:21 | 只看该作者
我的工作用的最多就是动手,软件的应用发面就只有图形调试的时候用到。所以Programming language:
Operation System:
Tools:
这几项我就只有删除了。
我新写的简历放在1楼了。麻烦大家帮忙修改了。
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发表于 19-2-2009 10:52:55 | 只看该作者
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象样很多了, 请把你的Summary再完善下, 加上年份等量化词来增强说服力。比如说,sufficient experience on XX for 4 years

4 years experience on XX.

具体的,我回家给看吧。语法之类的,等你架子全定下来后再说,或者你可以去让你LP找我姐去。她的E文比我好多了:P
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 楼主| 发表于 19-2-2009 16:33:22 | 只看该作者
呵呵。谢谢了。版主
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