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[language study] 【My Christmas 2008 】just enjoy it

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发表于 25-12-2008 18:06:36 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

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Just enjoy it.

Today is the Christmas, I have invited our officemate have a little patty in midday. Every body has with smile in face and enjoys the happy day. I have used my mobile phone take some photo to remember the happy time.

This is a first time that I use English to describe a patty, maybe there have some mistake in English grammar or some words, but I am enjoy this event that similar as I enjoy the Christmas.

I also hope every body and their families have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

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bigwangjun + 20 真实!朴实!
tinyhuhu + 20 Happy!真实!
vivi0905 + 30 u look so happy !
ritaclin + 30 Thanks for sharing!
lxbtiger + 30 You are genius!

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发表于 25-12-2008 18:14:48 | 只看该作者

It sounds good!

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发表于 25-12-2008 20:51:27 | 只看该作者
fantastic!
btw u guys work on X'mas day? should ask the boss for some bonus

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 楼主| 发表于 25-12-2008 22:22:29 | 只看该作者
we have not any bonus,  we will have holiday on 28 Dec 2008 to 4 Jan 2009.

Due to the bad market this year, our comany has canceled many bonus, and office staffs just work 4 days per week during Dec 2008 to Mar 2009, I am not sure when the market become better.

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ritaclin + 30 Give u 30 points as X'mas bonus;) Hopef

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发表于 25-12-2008 22:27:47 | 只看该作者
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发表于 26-12-2008 11:24:43 | 只看该作者

回复 #4 bigrixin 的帖子

things will be better.

best wishes for u !   

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 楼主| 发表于 26-12-2008 12:25:51 | 只看该作者
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发表于 26-12-2008 12:30:21 | 只看该作者
节日快乐!
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发表于 26-12-2008 12:56:27 | 只看该作者
LZ很不错哦  加油
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发表于 26-12-2008 18:20:11 | 只看该作者
原帖由 bigrixin 于 26-12-2008 13:25 发表



I would like you give me bonus in here.   hehe

Oh, I didn't see this post when I was giving you the bonus
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发表于 26-12-2008 20:14:26 | 只看该作者
erevy one in the photos   looked  very happy.

thanks.
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发表于 30-12-2008 15:26:55 | 只看该作者
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 楼主| 发表于 1-1-2009 10:28:22 | 只看该作者
I asked an English teacher help me check my article. I just correct some mistakes. I do not want mislead anyone.
Thanks


Today is Christmas Day, I invited our officemates to have a small patty at noon. Everybody was enjoying the happy party with smile. I have took some photos with my mobile phone to remember the happy time.

This is the first time for me to describe a patty in English, maybe there are some mistakes in the spelling of words or grammar, however, I enjoy it as same as I enjoyed the Christmas party itself.

I also hope everybody and their families Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
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发表于 20-2-2009 17:51:44 | 只看该作者
i want to write sth ,but my English is poor .
your TZ is very good .   up !up! studying .......
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