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Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies. Do you agree or disagree? What should the government do?
Under escalating stress of globalization, increasing number of people realize the importance of traditional culture. In the mean time, some assert that government should invest in tradition, such as music, drama or painting because a strong tradition could civilize a country. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this opinion.
There is no denying that numerals benefits are being brought for us by traditional arts. In the first place, traditional arts can built up people’s awareness of beauty and enhance mental level for individuals. Recent researches conducted have already proved that the right side of human brain could be exploited more after learning arts. The second point for this is that citizens will love and respect their country more deeply after understanding tradition. In other words, when learning tradition, people will realize how many great works were created by ancestors and how ingenious this nation was. Therefore, they will be proud as one part of this country. Additionally, traditional arts will create friend environment to the world and rise the communication opportunities between different nations. As universal language, traditional arts performed on Beijing Olympic Games show the spirit and welcome of China.
Overall, since tradition brings a vast number of advantages, government should take measures to support it. Firstly, government could require the press cover the strength of traditional culture and arts to public. Furthermore, authorities could supply more free visiting days for all the citizens to theaters and museums. More specifically, great artists or individuals who contribute many to tradition should get prizes from government.
Based on discussion offered above, I firmly believe that tradition plays pivotal role of a country. Therefore, it is necessary that governments create convenient situation for protecting and developing tradition culture and arts.
[ 本帖最后由 sara1106 于 31-8-2010 14:07 编辑 ] |
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