口语task2写成这样的TOPIC。。词汇啊，语法啊，能到6分吗？？

森林之王

我是在这论坛资料里下载的，TOPIC2。粘贴一下。。写成这样的TOPIC。。词汇啊，语法啊，能到6分吗？？


5：你想学的一门第二外语
I want to learn Japanese as a second foreign language, because I work for a Sino-Japanese company, so Japanese is very important for me at work. Actually, I have been learning Japanese for several years and worked in Tokyo for one year, but I really want to improve it and be an expert, because I am interested in the Japanese literature and the animation. I have a dream that someday I could read those books without any misunderstanding. Moreover, last year, I didn’t pass The Japanese Language Proficiency Test (JLPT) (Level 1).I think I should keep learning and pass it this year. An old Chinese saying goes like this: practice makes perfect, so I will read more Japanese books and seeing a lot of Japanese films to improve my Japanese.

6: 迟到
I was late for one of my friends’ wedding ceremony because I encountered into a traffic jam that day. The wedding ceremony was scheduled to start at 11:30 am. It would take me almost one hour to reach there, so I got off at 10:00 am and was sure I would punctual for that. However, something unexpected happened to me. I was delayed by a traffic jam. At the beginning, I didn’t realize how serious it was, I thought perhaps it would only take me several minutes and everything would be fine as soon as possible. But in fact, a horrible car accident occurred at the crossing and blocked the street and drew a group of people to see what happened. 40 mins later, with the help of the police, the traffic continued to move forward. So I was late when I reached the weeding. I felt awful sorry about that and apologized for my friend. He said that was okay and very glad I could come. I learned something important from the late.

7：电视节目
Friends
My favorite program is named friends. It’s a TV serials programs for adults which started in 1994 and ended in 2004, lasting about 10 years!  I started to watch the show 4 years ago and attracted by its interesting plot and funny characters immediately. This show is about six people, on their own and struggling to survive in the real world, find the companionship, comfort and support they get from each other to be the perfect antidote to the pressures of life.
This TV show entertains me a lot and I like it very much. I feel very relaxed and happy when I watch it. I think the show teaches me to cherish the friendship with my friends and how to share happiness and sorrow with them.

[ 本帖最后由 森林之王 于 25-11-2009 19:15 编辑 ]

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MillerYang

语法词汇你考试的时候也不一定能记住多少。。。

多准备一些口语化的连接词、短语什么的，再想点比较有趣的独特的idea可能比背别人的材料效果要好

森林之王

。。恩。我也不是想直接背。。是想自己准备出来。起码少犯语法错误。流利度也会提高点。。。。。就算句子不是太华丽，词汇什么的达不到6分。。也靠点流利提平均一下

3WU

愚见如下：
这是口语topic 吗？还是作为写作练习？ 看了一下总体。发现语法问题比较严重。LZ 很喜欢说完because  然后又 so。 这两个在一个句子里只能用其中一个。
以第一个topic 来分析。

I want to learn Japanese as a second foreign language, because I work for a Sino-Japanese company, so Japanese is very important for me at work.
（I want to learn Japanese as a second foreign language. I work for a Sino-Japanese company, so Japanese is very important for me at work. ）
Actually, I have been learning Japanese for several years and worked (working) in Tokyo for one year. But I really want to improve it and be an expert of it. because(Because) I am interested in the Japanese literature and the animation. I have a dream that someday（at one day） I could read those books without any misunderstanding. Moreover, last year, I didn’t pass The(the) Japanese Language Proficiency Test (JLPT) (Level 1).I think I should keep learning and pass it this year.
( I think I should keep learning so that  I could pass it this year)

An old Chinese saying goes like this: practice makes perfect. So I will read more Japanese books and seeing(watch) a lot (more) of Japanese films to improve my Japanese.

另外就是词语，尤其连词比较匮乏。整天都是 so  because..  可以用其他变化语句。 比如 since, due to, hence, therefore, etc.

[ 本帖最后由 3WU 于 25-11-2009 19:35 编辑 ]

dark008

口语只要你能不停的说就能到6分了，7分的话就需要优美和连贯的表达了，而且不能重复用词，比如不能老说because......

还有口语不是写的，你写了多少长篇大论没用，可能到考场的时候一个也想不起来，如果只是敲键盘的话，我最多的时候和6个老外文字聊天（在聊天室里面开了6个窗口），但是口语都没有上过7分，而且真正聊口语的时候才知道那个差呀~~~

总之，口语完全是靠练出来的

[ 本帖最后由 dark008 于 25-11-2009 19:41 编辑 ]

大鼻子狐狸

拒绝评论。人为的东西最难评价了。

森林之王

原帖由 dark008 于 25-11-2009 19:36 发表

                               
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口语只要你能不停的说就能到6分了，7分的话就需要优美和连贯的表达了，而且不能重复用词，比如不能老说because......

哦那。看来你也支持 “ 绝对可以， 只要你说出来比较顺畅，不是明显的背书”

Remy家

帮你稍微改一下哈~

5：你想学的一门第二外语
I am learning Japanese as a second foreign language, because I am working in a Sino-Japanese company, so Japanese is very important for me at work 去掉. Actually speeking, I have been learning Japanese for several years and worked in Tokyo for one year, but I really want to improve it and to be an expert, because I am interested in the Japanese literature and the animation. I have a dream  that is这个不是很确定哈 someday I could read those books without any misunderstanding. Moreover,这个连接词在这里用的不是很好 last year, I failed The Japanese Language Proficiency Test (JLPT) (Level 1).I think I should keep learning and try to pass it this year. An old Chinese saying goes like this: practice makes perfect, so I will read more Japanese books and seeing a lot of Japanese films to improve my Japanese.

对于这个话题，当初我自己准备的素材是：我想学法语，因为我从小就生长在中国，出国的经历非常少，我觉得，对于一个年轻人来说多体验不同的文化，多跟不同的背景的人交流，是一件美妙的事情。而且，现在随着中国经济的发展，来我们国家旅游的法国人也非常多。我想，学习法语可以让我和他们在交流上更加有效。不管我以后去法国还是接待法国朋友，我想，都是一件非常轻松愉快的事情。

PS：我某一次口语考试，还真考到这个了，不过当时说的时候跟准备的时候就会差一些，总会有一些即兴发挥的地方，我记得我当时就是重点在于中国越来越国际化，多学一门外语会让自己更加open，多交朋友什么的。
口语考试一定要轻松，我不管说的好坏，总会把面试官逗的呵呵笑，3次考试口语都是6分大概也跟气氛有关系吧


lz加油啊~

森林之王

谢谢。。。我是在一个帖子里下载出来的。。口语的。准备TASK2的TOPIC。。想问问而已。

森林之王

惭愧。。。惭愧。。。。不是我写的。。谢谢你们批改。。。。我只是问问。。写用的词汇。和句子复杂程度而已。。。象，，十天突破里，写的例子。。。感觉都是7分往上的。。对于我来说比较困难/

Remy家

继续说，关于电视节目，我自己准备的是cctv9的一个发现中国。

具体思路如下：发现这个节目是因为我要练习口语准备雅思考试，后来慢慢喜欢上了这个节目，因为这个节目是在外国人的角度看中国，介绍了平时跟我们眼中不一样的中国文化、饮食、旅游风景等。比如。。。。。（发挥下）。着重强调这个节目的独特视角和对自己的用处。

不建议lz把电视节目归结到一个电视剧上哦~

大鼻子狐狸

准备作文或口语topic，最好是自己写，而且不要硬背。如果是为口语准备的topic，自己写的东西跟自己联系比较密切，写出来其实应该算是事先理清思路的一种做法。背诵，即使是背诵自己写的东西，对于口语来说不是很明智的做法。我是这样的，选定一个topic，按写作的要求来写，作为写作练习。写完后自己跟家里人或对着空气离纸说几遍，但我不硬背的，所以同一个topic每次说的时候还是有差别的。我觉得这样更自然。

Remy家

原帖由 森林之王 于 25-11-2009 19:42 发表

                               
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惭愧。。。惭愧。。。。不是我写的。。谢谢你们批改。。。。我只是问问。。写用的词汇。和句子复杂程度而已。。。象，，十天突破里，写的例子。。。感觉都是7分往上的。。对于我来说比较困难/

口语不需要像作文那样子写长句难句，重点是要跟面试官沟通，让他明白你的意思。lz我不知道我给你推荐过yasi-口语，一个外国人办的网站么？上面第一部分就介绍了口语需要说什么，不需要说什么。。。

自己准备topic，并且尽量往自己的实际情况上靠，这样在part3的时候也不会乱了阵脚。

嘿嘿，现在工作不是很忙，也好久没看你上来了，就唠叨了好多。一定要加油哈~

森林之王

恩。谢谢。我也是这么想的。。。读熟。。口语很差。只能这样了

森林之王

哈哈。欢迎唠叨唠叨。。。。那网站我看了。。。。看他们对6分的语法，词汇什么的洋也还挺高呢。。

新格咪咪

大王你何时雅思阿 我下个月5号就要考试了 基本完蛋了 ～

森林之王

你曾经4个6怕什么呀。。我才是真的完蛋了。 比你晚一周。

jessi

LZ. 有这样考的吗？ 我记得好像是

WHAT
WHY
WHERE
WHEN

那样的陈述的吧

你几段我看了 主要是想说什么？ 我记得上次一个大叔问我 基本是一问一答的

TtiGeR

口语切忌背诵 不然丧失自然
二忌书面词 有些词完全不适用于口语 要熟练掌握口语常用短语
如果能流畅对答 没有较多语法错误 符合英语习惯 8分还是比较容易的

新格咪咪

原帖由 森林之王 于 25-11-2009 23:08 发表

                               
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你曾经4个6怕什么呀。。我才是真的完蛋了。 比你晚一周。

曾经沧海难为水， 如今雅思烂成灰～～

richardzha

感觉两年前的雅思是比如今的评分要高些.  
现在卡分太厉害了.

zqx890

越来越难啊，大家加把劲快考啊，，，，，，