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楼主肯定是女的，否则前戏不会那么长。。。。整整一段话，看了半天，到最后才发现是forplay更要命的是第二段一开始还是。。。。 脚印，是必须的·~~:zan :zan :zan 有才
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In order to learn a foreign language well, students should also learn about the culture and lifestyles of the people who speak the language. Do you agree or disagree?Under the wave of globalization, to learn a foreign language is of great importance to many people, especially for students. Some people suggest that the culture and lifestyles of native speakers should also be learned for the sake of proficiency. To my way of thinking, Students can largely benefit from these kinds of learning.
To begin with, culture is where language originates, therefore anyone who attempts to learn a language should have some acquaintance with the relevant culture. In some situations, one can not understand the language on condition that the context have some subtle information about the culture beneath it. The slang of “winner winner, chicken dinner” is a case in point. People who do not know about culture about casino in Las Vegas can by no means know the meaning of the phrase. Further more, knowing culture of other people will establish mutual trust, which, to a large extent, is of paramount important in communication.
In addition, lifestyles is a significant factor contribute to proficiency of language. There are numerous slang and jokes in a language that reflect the lifestyles of the people who speaks the language. To master a particular language well, one should know these lifestyles, otherwise he might not know what the native people really mean. For instance, one people travels to a country where he barely knows about the lifestyles, misunderstanding and confusion will definitely generate. It could be the tips he forget to give, or the conventions he do not understand. It could be the foods he can not appreciate, or the humor he can not sense. Whatever it is, it can not be a pleasant journey.
In conclusion, it will be beneficial to the language learner to learn the culture and lifestyles of the people who speak the language. 补充小知识No.1:
正式文体的写作里，不要出现缩写，即She's They've 除了所有格（Others'）不要出现' 这是被认为不正式的，全部展开写She is, They have (还可以多几个字，木哈哈）
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正式文体的写作里，也不要出现10以内的阿拉伯数字，
楼主的总结的确很有建设性，还有用第三人称叙述也很关键。请问楼主是在澳洲又考了雅思吗？是否在澳洲生活对雅思提高有很直接的作用（在英语环境中）? hmm 相当好 相当有活力的文章呀:lol 我就喜欢这种欢乐的楼主，学习了 高手一枚。。。 BossWoo 发表于 15-7-2011 22:08 static/image/common/back.gif
应某些童鞋要求,整理精简版一份,
嫌便楼猪啰嗦的童鞋可以直接看,爬完楼猪啰嗦楼的也可以拿这个做notes
如 ...
good！多谢分享:zan 这个一定要顶，有种醍醐灌顶的感觉。 好贴啊！ 这个好看 Mark，学习！ 留个脚印 来请教，这个however应该放在哪里
However, an controversial issue （这里？）that whether people should be entitled to use fresh water as much as they what （这里？）is still a hot topic in all levels of our society. F_LEE 发表于 9-10-2013 21:48 static/image/common/back.gif
来请教，这个however应该放在哪里
However, an controversial issue （这里？）that whether people sho ...
我觉得应该在第二个位置。 那么多兔基斯表情加卖萌语气看得眼花... 这个传说中的精华贴今日终得一见, 佩服佩服。问个具体问题， LZ不一定还在看此帖，其他大侠如有高见也请帮忙回答。
我知道在正式文体中不该使用第一、二人称，可雅思G类题目动不动就是要求“do you agree or disagree”, "to what extend do you agree", "....give your opinion"
这种情况下主题句里难道不该亮明自己的观点吗？写上如：I believe, my opinion is....? 同为civil engineer的顶一个，很有帮助哦，亲 BossWoo 发表于 15-7-2011 23:07 static/image/common/back.gif
我是一个小坑坑~~
The Cranberries要去上海发财啦，啊啊啊~~楼猪追星族时代的挚爱阿！！！！ ...
是个深坑，甜蜜欢乐有内涵的坑啊 本帖最后由 F_LEE 于 11-11-2013 15:21 编辑
guomd 发表于 4-11-2013 18:48 static/image/common/back.gif
这个传说中的精华贴今日终得一见, 佩服佩服。问个具体问题， LZ不一定还在看此帖，其他大侠如有高见也请帮忙 ...
我在《不要告诉雅思考官你有这本书》P260看到了相反的答案，这是一本前考官写的书。所以作文里不能有I，We这一点应该不是那么绝对吧