下周再战A类 mark, thx! 这真的是掏心肝的宝贝儿啊!楼主太无私太伟大了!每一条戳的都是命门。等我能写一篇完整的英文作文之后,再开始对照修改研读。 太感谢楼主了!4年前考过,就再也没碰了,这次要A 4*7,觉得写作最难,感谢MM的这个帖,明天开始正式复习,等写出文章来,一定要帮忙改改啊!!
感觉LZ是个性子特直、特活泼的丫头!我朋友都是这种性子!很好!很强大!! 明确表示lz的帖子对于后天要考试的人来说太长了。 那如果是TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREEAND DISAGREE要怎么分西 花了半天终于看完了~~~~~~~楼主太有才了~~ 原帖由 BossWoo 于 17-7-2011 22:11 发表 http://www.freeoz.org/ibbs/images/common/back.gif
不只一个童鞋反映楼猪话唠看得头晕~
两个建议
1,亲~你去豆瓣混混再来看好吗?保你觉得楼猪文风清新简练哟!!!
2,等楼猪填完坑,整理一个所略办攻略好了。。。
~~~楼猪是个好楼猪~~~
毛将军题
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楼猪太有才了! 这个要顶:yct_6 学习了.下次就用上 拜读了楼主MM的论述,受益匪浅。以下习作一篇,恳请楼主MM把把脉,9月17又要考A类了,谢谢了:)
Some people think taking care of one’s health is not only for individual benefits. It should also be responsibility for society. To what extend do you agree?
Health care is quite popular a topic amongst people in contemporary society with some believes that it should be society’s responsibility to establish and maintain public health care system. Others insist, on the other hand, that each individual should take care of himself.
It is fairly sure that society must care for each individual’s health. In most developed country, there are already mature systems to cater for citizen’s medical care. In this case, most people can be taken good care of when sick. When having some serious disease in emergency, moreover, such a system will share most of the economic burden of the individual, so that he will not be deprived of all his deposit by merely a fatal illness. The developing world, in contrast, mostly does not have such a system that is working smoothly. People living in such a circumstance will not feel secure enough as they are not well secured to cope with a health disaster. This will alter the goal of living from pursing the truth of life to try to make as money as possible in order to be sufficiently safe. Such society, in the end, will become less productive since everyone cares for money only, nothing else.
It is not always the responsibility, however, for society to take care of one’s fitness. Each person, to some degree, needs to take care of himself. A reasonable life style is always necessary, no matter how busy one is. But unfortunately, many young people stay up late until mid-night; miss meals when engaged in work. How can it be possible to become healthy in this way even if the best medical care is available?
What is needed, as described above, is to have government and individual join hands to guarantee each one in good health condition. It is equally important for the former to ensure enough resource for medical care, and for the latter to lead a healthy style of living. 学习ING 楼主就是神啊!5.5分的作文过来拜拜!!希望下次通过哦! 我只能说,楼主这么使用这么欢乐的文体,表达了这么系统的一套理论, 实在是太有才了!
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回复 #2 BossWoo 的帖子
收藏了。 lz太有才了,收藏一下。 看了一段就想收藏了看了两段就想回复了
:classical: 不知道阔耐的搂住在不在?按你的经验来看,我应该拼命的写论文哈。学术论文就是介个样子滴~~~天天看论文,然后模仿写? 我也进来学习一下。 这个真是厉害了,亲!! 这个必须得回复’我指着这个考作文7分呢 先踩一下,写得貌似挺生动 写的很好,学习了。 :) :) :) :) :)超有内涵的帖子 收藏了 楼主太棒了,爱死你了。我就是死在了写作上阿,其他都是8和7,就是写作5.5. 我哭死阿。下个月初又要考了。看了你这个帖子,赶紧写文章去。太谢谢你了!:good 墙贴!!! 哈哈,幽默实用,收藏了!