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作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 16:08
标题: 紧急求助！
请大家帮忙修改我贴出来的英文，把看不懂的单词、句子，或者是有错误的、表达不到位的地方，标注出来，多谢了！

急用！

重分酬谢哈

[ 本帖最后由 vivi0905 于 9-6-2008 16:17 编辑 ]

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 16:09
Since spiritual life can be enriched and developed only when the material life is guaranteed, eating becomes the most crucial need and task in life. As closely linked with eating, rituals in meals then are indispensable to be mentioned and concerned. Manners at tables, as one branch of rituals, are undoubtedly shaped and influenced by cultures to a large extent, because the ritual can reflect a nation’s convention and its culture.

The culture, created by human, is a special existing way of human and a common wealth of human. But human’s existence and development differ from regions, nations and races. As a result, cultures of the West and China have different special features since they are created by their own races under different humanity environments. It indicates that culture presents various styles and each contains its special characteristic, which works in concert with the specific ritual in communication.

The Chinese traditional culture is broad and deep with long history, emphasizing social ethics culture which involves humanity nature. Thus it has restrained system, which makes Chinese people tend to be more defensive than aggressive. On the contrary, Western cultures are diverse and separable, with expansion and aggression. It is also known that the Western cultures advocate religious beliefs and scientific reasons with abundant of humanism spirits.① These two show the different creative abilities and spirits, as well as the different historical characteristics and special styles. Only when getting acquainted with cultures of the West and the East, can we comprehend precisely and learn techniques for adjusting to them both.

Culture consists of patterns and behaviors acquired and transmitted by symbols, constituting the distinctive achievements of human groups, and the essential core of culture consists of traditional ideas, especially their values.②

Cultural phenomena, especially those which are almost universal around us, embody the cultural symbol. Therefore, table manners of Western countries and China are more a kind of introduction, while the cultural roots which cause these differences are the essential points and substance of this thesis. Because culture is made up of a great multitude of cultural phenomena, which contain the main features of a nation and the codes of the nation’s culture.

[ 本帖最后由 vivi0905 于 9-6-2008 19:02 编辑 ]

作者: woody81 时间: 9-6-2008 16:13
靠！刚一上任就接一大活

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 16:16
标题: 回复 #3 woody81 的帖子
嘻嘻，总裁快帮忙哦！看不懂的标注出来就好了

作者: KALALA 时间: 9-6-2008 16:17
请大家帮助vivi修改毕业论文，谢谢大家了！

本猫英语太差就不在这丢脸了

作者: ritaclin 时间: 9-6-2008 16:19
标题: 回复 #5 KALALA 的帖子
you're not thick road

作者: 青山 时间: 9-6-2008 16:20
我这个亚斯5.5的，就不献丑了。

作者: woody81 时间: 9-6-2008 16:26
标题: 回复 #4 vivi0905 的帖子
That s a good topic.Is it your paper writing?

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 16:33
标题: 回复 #8 woody81 的帖子
Yes, it is mine, part of my paper's introduction

my teacher said that the expression should be more easy to understand, but I do understand them all. So please help me to do this job

thank you all

[ 本帖最后由 vivi0905 于 9-6-2008 19:03 编辑 ]

作者: naughtybaby 时间: 9-6-2008 16:41
标题: 回复 #2 vivi0905 的帖子
vivi，上来扫一眼看到这个帖子，我在赶一个LAW REPORT, 只有明晚帮你改论文好么

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 16:51

为什么没人。。。

作者: ritaclin 时间: 9-6-2008 17:04
seems no mistake

A bit Chinglish I guess?
coz it feels like I'm reading China Daily...

作者: naughtybaby 时间: 9-6-2008 17:20
Since spiritual life can be enriched and developed only when the（the去掉） material life is guaranteed, eating becomes the most crucial need and task in life. As closely linked with eating, rituals in meals then are indispensable to be mentioned and concerned. Manners at tables, as one branch of rituals, are undoubtedly shaped and influenced by cultures to a large extent, because the ritual （rituals）can reflect a nation’s convention and its culture.

The (the 去掉，C大写)culture, created by human,（改成prosperous in human civilization） is a special existing way of human and a common wealth of human.(unique and symbolic pattern of human activity) But human’s existence and development differ from regions, nations and races.（这句意思是表达“但人类的存在和发展因宗教，国家和种族而不同”的话，differ from 改为differ in 或vary in更好. differ from 固定搭配意思是和什么不同，原话表达的是“人类生存和发展和宗教，国家和种族不同”） As a result, cultures of the West and China have different special features since they are created by their own races under different humanity environments. It indicates that culture presents various styles and each contains its special characteristic（s）, which works（characteristic我给你加复数了，动词记得去掉第三人称单数，另外我建议动词换成influence更学术） in concert with the （a）specific ritual in communication.

实在是没时间了，就给你挤兑这两段，我大概改了下语法和一些用词构句，剩下部分其他同志帮忙看，谢谢～！

作者: maaboo 时间: 9-6-2008 17:27
标题: 回复 #2 vivi0905 的帖子
你写成汉语我都看不懂……

作者: woody81 时间: 9-6-2008 17:56
标题: 回复 #14 maaboo 的帖子
yeah,too academic right?

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 18:20
标题: 回复 #15 woody81 的帖子
其实就是想要改得更加通俗易懂，有的表达理解起来比较费劲。。。

多谢帮忙

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 18:27
标题: 回复 #12 ritaclin 的帖子

You think it's like China-Daily-style ?

that is right the problem !

my teaher asked me to make the words more easily understood ......

Help !

[ 本帖最后由 vivi0905 于 9-6-2008 18:55 编辑 ]

作者: woody81 时间: 9-6-2008 18:27
标题: 回复 #16 vivi0905 的帖子
i do want to heip you,vivi,but i have no idea and time to change it better! i think you need to improve it by yourself,try you best,whatever result you will be satisfied,sorry vivi.

[ 本帖最后由 woody81 于 9-6-2008 18:29 编辑 ]

作者: nizi 时间: 9-6-2008 20:09
标题: The Challenge Of Cultural Development.By D.Paul Schafer
During the last three or four decades, interest in cultural development has escalated rapidly. One evidence of this is the declaration by the United Nations and UNESCO of the World Decade for Cultural Development (1988-1997). Another is the creation by the same two organizations of the World Commission on Culture and Development (1993-95). Still another is the attention focused on cultural development by governments throughout the world, as well as by institutions like the World Bank, the International Monetary Fund, and the Organization for Economic Co-operation and Development.

Despite the escalating interest in cultural development and the proliferation of books, articles, reports and studies on the subject, there is still very little on cultural development itself. What is cultural development? How is it defined and conceptualized? What is it designed to accomplish? How is it positioned in the overall scheme of things? How is it approached and orchestrated? And perhaps most importantly of all, what is its future?

It is questions such as these that constitute the concern of this monograph. Its purpose is to examine the nature, scope, subject matter, importance, process, and future of cultural development. As a result, it is concerned much more with the foundation, framework, definition, parameters and conceptualization of cultural development than it is with cultural development practices or cultural development experiences in different parts of the world. The need for a document of this type is readily apparent. Had sufficient consideration been given to the nature, meaning, definition, scope, and substance of development fifty years ago, the encounter with development over the last half century would have been very different from what it has proven to be.

Like other monographs in the World Culture Project, The Challenge of Cultural Development is exploratory and illustrative rather than authoritative and definitive in nature. Its purpose is to sketch out and main contours and principal features of cultural development and put enough flesh on them so that this particular concept of development can stand alongside other concepts of development as a potential guide to public and private policy and decision-making in the future.

作者: nizi 时间: 9-6-2008 20:31
标题: what is ur subject?
i read only the :
subject
the first sentences of each bodycopy

作者: naughtybaby 时间: 9-6-2008 22:44
I guess her topic is table manners

作者: ritaclin 时间: 9-6-2008 22:52

原帖由 vivi0905 于 9-6-2008 18:27 发表

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You think it's like China-Daily-style ? that is right the problem !

my teaher asked me to make the words more easily understood ......

Help !

China Daily style is also my problem

I regret spending money on it when I was in school...should have spend more on Herald Tribune

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 23:40
标题: 回复 #20 nizi 的帖子
my topic is the cultural differences reflected in Western and Chinese table manners

作者: 采薇子 时间: 9-6-2008 23:42
ok , well done....

I' m now leaving to print my paper

thank you all

作者: 喜鹊 时间: 10-6-2008 10:34

原帖由 nizi 于 9-6-2008 20:09 发表

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During the last three or four decades, interest in cultural development has escalated rapidly. One evidence of this is the declaration by the United Nations and UNESCO of the World Decade for Cultural ...

文章写的漂亮，虽然我没怎么看懂，惭愧。

作者: woody81 时间: 10-6-2008 10:43
ok,that s all.the paper work has been finished

作者: ritaclin 时间: 10-6-2008 11:07
标题: 回复 #24 vivi0905 的帖子
con！

作者: flyday 时间: 11-6-2008 15:25
CODE OF CONDUCT IN CHINA DAILY WAY

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