My name is ***. I took part in the academic IELTS test on ***(Exam Date) at ***(Exam Center Name) (Center No.***) for the purpose of pursuing Master Degree abroad. My candidate number was ***. I am writing to you to apply for a re-mark of writing and speaking part of my IELTS test.
As pre-requisites of profession assessment, I was informed that I have to take an IELTS test and reach at least level 7 on all four components by a university. However, my speaking is only at 6.5. I have been prepared the IELTS for nearly one year and this is already the 4th IELTS I have taken so far. I think my English speaking should have reached at level 7. My poor score of speaking maybe is due to nervous during the speaking test, after all the topics of "community helps for elder people" is somehow too far away from the realistic life of China, and has been limitedly recognized by the society as a whole, therefore I know nearly nothing about it.
Moveover, for the writing part, I strongly feel that I did better than level 7, for I wrote with clear ideas and rich evidence and vocabulary.
I will lose the golden opportunity of applying the good reputation university if I wait for another 3 months for the next test. As a result, I will appreciate if my speaking and writing parts to be remarked. Enclosed are my original test results and the payment for this application.
Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated!
As a result, I will appreciate if my speaking and writing parts to be remarked 是这句吗?
楼主的信里面还有个地方可以改改。 以前雅思有限制,两次考试要隔3个月,但现在没有这个限制了,所以:I will lose the golden opportunity of applying the good reputation university if I wait for another 3 months for the next test. 这句可以改改。作者: zycbob 时间: 21-8-2009 17:49
只是感觉哈,有待商榷,别锤我,比如有些地方用 i will 不是很合适。
I have been prepared the IELTS for nearly one year and this is already the 4th IELTS
after all the topics of "community helps for elder people" is somehow too far away
and reach at least level 7 on all four components by a university
My poor score of speaking maybe is due to nervous