标题: 请帮忙看一下这句话，有没有错误？ [打印本页] 作者: lains 时间: 16-4-2009 13:10 标题: 请帮忙看一下这句话，有没有错误？ In addition, the sport stars tend to represent positive images and they usually become the models which are encouraging many youngsters to follow their steps.作者: hobtack 时间: 16-4-2009 19:17
用and连接2个简单句，严格的说属于语法错误。作者: bfox 时间: 16-4-2009 20:01
In addition, the sport stars tend to represent positive images therefore usually become models which are encouraging many youngsters to follow their steps.