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标题: 经验之谈:给大家推荐一个好的网站学习写作的 [打印本页]

作者: hsuehhan    时间: 31-1-2012 00:31
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这是我一个在牛津大学读人类学博士的朋友推荐给我的。说也是他们老师推荐的。
据说是英国中产喜欢看的网站,估计会符合考官的胃口。
特别是有一个栏目叫“essay and opinion",里面都是蛮对路的议论文。
当然,能写到那个水平肯定不现实,关键看一下思路,论点论据怎么提的。
我自打抛开所谓“雅思写作高分”的教科书后,一直看的这个,成绩果然大有提高呢。

左边一栏,有很多书报的连接,有兴趣也可以点进去看看。
GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!
作者: Serin    时间: 31-1-2012 00:45
标题: 回复 #1 hsuehhan 的帖子
我很早以前订阅这个网站的RSS看,每天都有三篇左右的文章涉及艺术人文之类的主题。 不过忙起来肯定没时间看。
作者: echox    时间: 31-1-2012 09:05
非常感谢!
作者: PGKTD    时间: 4-3-2012 11:58
感谢分享。
作者: yunsa    时间: 4-3-2012 12:06
谢谢分享!
作者: cookie2me    时间: 3-4-2012 14:03
标题: 也请yrqin等作文高手过目~
贴上一篇今天练的作文,题目没有什么难的地方,因为是烤G类,试了2次没有碰到agree和disagree这样能够一边倒的题目,反是些report和discuss 或是2个open question     

这篇作业是模仿yrqin高手给坛子里童鞋们的逻辑关系写的 (感谢yrqin啊! 呕心沥血啊 )  请各位指导~~

Some people think they live in the high-rise building blocks feel only and unhappy, but others do not think so. Discuss both view and give own opinion.

In the present-day society, increasing number of people tend to live in the apartments. Whilst the possible unpleasant issues that may bring, I firmly believe the benefits of it is hardly deniable. The reasons of the opposite views are discussed as the following.

Admittedly, choosing apartment would lead to several unfavorable situations. Firstly, people live in the high-rise are much easier to be interrupted by the noises from the neighbors. A telling example is that, the whole residents in level 3 to 5 would be afflicted with the terrible noise if a new family move in to the level 4 of the building and carry on some renovation works. That would result in aggravating the neighbor relationship. Besides, to the aged group, living in apartment offers less chance for their originally limited social life. Due to using lift and not sufficient public areas, making new friends or having both room and possibility to meet their neighbor friends become hardly practicable. That would sadly damage the aged dwellers’ psychological wellbeing to some extents, consequently.

Even so, a vast number of merits of choosing high-rise residential building are easily noticeable. First of all, for the car-owners, having under-ground garage means no more worry of finding the limited road-side parking place if they work till late. Especially in the case of the private locked garage, it offers apparent security together with the no dusty condition. Besides the security to the vehicles, other properties of the apartment residents are also well secured. In other words, by using the swipe card, the possibility of in-door stealing is significantly decreased. Even the minority groups, as the breeding-mother with baby and the elder, live in the apartments confidently safety. Furthermore, it enables much disposable time for its dwellers. Unlike living in the house, owners have no necessity to allocate extra time to the garden and backyard, and free worry about being fined to the un-swept front door area. By contrast, the property manager hired staffs to address all these issues. Thus, the residents of the high-rise building have much more time to enjoy their recreations.  

To conclude, although some inconveniences living in apartment may bring, the obvious security to both the property and personals adds to the promising leisure time are undeniable. Therefore, I strongly insist residents there are definitely benefited.




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