lains 发表于 16-4-2009 14:10:01

请帮忙看一下这句话，有没有错误？

In addition, the sport stars tend to represent positive images and they usually become the models which are encouraging many youngsters to follow their steps.

hobtack 发表于 16-4-2009 20:17:22

用and连接2个简单句，严格的说属于语法错误。

bfox 发表于 16-4-2009 21:01:34

In addition, the sport stars tend to represent positive images therefore usually become models which are encouraging many youngsters to follow their steps.

个人意见，仅供参考。
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