Freeoz工作室的简历样本(目前不提供修改，历史记录仅供参考)

william23

leily jj 偶是在9.1 月号政策前的, #333

gexinming

你挤上了末班车

qiaoqiao

要努力发帖子了

qqyang1980

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谢谢回复。时间一天一天地过，不知道什么时候才能真正走上本行?

如果你就一个人在这里，那推荐你务必澳洲和中国两条腿走路，否则，两边都不是graduate那就给套牢了。

老大卫

不好意思, 最近来少了, 改简历实在太花时间, 偶最近只有零打碎敲得时间, 没有办法静下心来. 蕾蕾, 单衣纵酒, oea, qqyang, 你们辛苦啊.....

xxxx1979

感谢“leily”， 我会按照你的意见，改一下！！

shopfloor

还好我的帖子数量够了，嘿嘿

一特立独行的猪

都看了一遍，感觉帮助很大，谢谢啊。
改起来真的是很不容易，我看着都累的不行，非常感谢老大卫、单衣纵酒、leily。
我也非常感谢各位上来帖简历的朋友，我觉得看了你们的简历，尤其是反复更改的简历，让我觉得很惭愧。但也觉得在奋斗的路上，我不是孤单的，有很多人跟我一样痛苦着挣扎着改进着。
很少来freeoz，以前也从来没有任何一个地方告诉我简历的要求和求职信的格式，来了半年也只有过一次中介面试。
而且之前也很少从中介这位最终读者的角度去想，也属于在国内工作找人习惯了吧。
很多人虽然渺渺数语，但看出背后包含的无数辛勤汗水，比如楼上shopfloor  兄弟。还有某位兄弟一句图书馆所有写Resume书的总汇，让我汗颜再汗颜，反省再反省。
一个找工作你们尚且能如此用心，以后工作起来肯定是好同志。
明白了很多，我就不贴上来啦，自己下去闷头改。改好之后帖上来，虽然我知道工作室各位已经立下规矩，但我帖上来其实是给自己一个交代。
没人帮助真是不行，网上有这么多人互相帮助，俺也有了继续努力的动力。谢谢大家，所有人的话都看得出是一番心血的结晶。

canberraharbour

这个入门规则有鼓励灌水的嫌疑。

一特立独行的猪

我的简历，应聘的是Software Analyst，正如我之前所说的，给自己一个交代，欢迎拍砖

Resume

Name: Email: Mobile: Address:

Career Objective
Software Analyst

Professional Summary
        3-year experience on automation testing (C#)
        1-year experience on SQL scripting
        Sound knowledge of Microsoft Windows Platforms
        3.5-year experience in Microsoft China
        Closely worked with U.S. developers for 3 years
        Strong team-play spirit
        1.5 team-leading experience
        Through understanding of SDLC

Skills
        3-year experience on ASP.net website testing
        1.5-year experience on SQL testing
        1.5-year experience using C#
        Good skills in diagnosing problems and reporting relevant data.
        Strong oral ability
        Strong analytical skills
        Strong written documentation skills

Professional Experiences
2003.10—2007.03: Company A
Software Analyst

2006.07.15--2007.03.20: Visual Studio.net 2007 testing team
Responsibilities
        Responsible for IIS, CLR, and Scripting Automation testing on Windows Vista (all versions except English and Japanese), with the focus on Globalization
        Coordinate with Japanese testers (original testing script writers) and U.S. developers
        Compose testing scripts (C# and VBscript), file bugs and send reports.
Achievements
        Deep understanding of IIS, CLR
        Automation Experience
        Deep understanding of Globalization
        SQL installation experience
        Vista testing experience

2005.02.20--2006.07.14: MSN Money testing team
Responsibilities
        Responsible for Navigation & Organization testing of MSN Money website
        Testing the backend based on SQL server scripting
Achievements
        Build up a testing team (MSN Money is the first time outsourcing to China)
        ASP.net Website testing experience
        Basic understanding of U.S. stock market
        Team management ability development

2004.04.13--2005.02.19: MSN Client testing team
Responsibilities
        Responsible for User Interface Testing and Functional Testing for MSN Client software
        Responsible for the integration of hotmail, windows media player, and MSN Messenger to MSN Client
Achievements
        User interface design and testing experience
        Automation experience using C# script based on MAUI (DLLs based on MSAA) and WebRunner (Microsoft inside tool, more fit for website testing than WinRunner)
        Deep understanding on utility testing

2002.11--2003.9: Company B
Outsourcing contractor of xxx company, 500 size company
Mobile Software Testing Engineer

2003.3--2003.9: Mobile WAP Functional Testing
Responsibilities
        Responsible for the User Interface and WAP functional testing for Sony Ericsson PDA (Symbian OS)
        Tested Java OTA (Over The Air) Download for Sony Ericsson mobile phones
        Bug reporting
Achievements
        Top performer on bug filing (number and quality)
        Represented Sony Ericsson on China Mobile Communication Company Annual meeting
        Experience on web server setup using Apache

2001.07--2002.10: Company C
Technical Support
Responsibilities
        Responsible for WAN/LAN administration
        Win2k file server maintenance.

Education
Bachelor of Electrical Engineering – Beijing, China

Professional Training
2005.4 Test Leader training, Internet Security online training
2005.3 MSN Money web testing training
2004.10 C# Programming
2004.7 WebRunner, Test Lead training, Longhorn
2004.4 CoreXT, Source Deeper, Build Tracker, Octopus
2004.3 Spring Broad, How to break software
2004.2 .net Framework, Globalization and localization testing
2004.1 WinRunner, TestDirector, software testing
2003.10 Symbian OS
2003.9 BlueTooth
2003.8 WAP、GPRS
2003.3 Java OTA download
2003.2 Training on Sony Ericsson testing tools

Reference available upon request

老大卫

LS的简历很公正, 格式没有问题, 但具体描述上还不能突出你有别人没有的东西.也就是说,不够出彩. 下一步是看广告, 多看广告,看看怎么根据广告改写自己的简历,突出重点.
另外: Closely worked with U.S. developers for 3 years这样的写法对澳洲公司来说好像没有什么value,要看看有什么更好的写法.

gexinming

没人看我的简历，收到的全是回绝信

hewei

XX   SQAE(Supplier Quality Assurance Engineer)
Gender:                Marital Status:  
Date of Birth:         Place of Birth:
E-mail:                 Phone:   

YOUR COMPANY WILL GAIN:

1.        An experienced engineer with a positive attitude.
2.        An engineer who likes people and likes to be with people.
3.        An engineer who is detail oriented and good at task requiring vigilance, accuracy, speed, and detection of minor differences.
4.        An engineer with strong analytical, trouble-shooting, and problem-solving skills.
5.        An engineer who can work independently.
6.        A responsible engineer who will do a good job for you.  
7.        A dependable engineer who wants to work.  
8.        An engineer who learns fast, and works well under pressure.
9.        An engineer who is flexible, mobile, and willing to go on an assignment on short notice.

WORK EXPERIENCE：

XXX    COMPANY FUJIAN CHINA (joint-stock by XXXXX)
(From July 2003 to May 2007) SQAE(Supplier Quality Assurance Engineer)  *interior&exterior parts

Responsibilities:

        Involved in manage and supervise the suppliers.
        Analyze and solve the production quality problems.
        Involved in activities concerned to suppliers,such as Cost Down,Zero Storage,2S3D and so on.
        Involved in the APQP&CP process,tracking every progresses(from concept approval to production),and continual improving,in order to meet the customers（internal &external）needs and expectations.
        Examine and approve the PPAP.
        Organize the quality-promoting activities ,such as: zero defects. error mistake proofing.process monitoring and layered process audit and so on to improve the production quality.
        Involved in suppliers evaluation &selection.

SKILL&KNOWLEDGE:

        Be familiar with the interior&exterior parts(especially WHEEL ASSY, STRG、 DOOR TRIM)’characterisic, mamufacturing process, tests.
        APQP&CP(Advanced Production Quality Planning&Control Plan)
        PPAP(Production Part Approval Process)
        SQAP(Supplier Quality Assurance Process)
        PFMEA(Production Failure Mode and Effects Analysis)
        QC 7 tools for analyzing and solving quality problems
        Error Mistake Proofing
        TS16949\ISO9000
        MSA(Measuring System Analysis)
        SPC(Statistical Process Control)
        Purchasing knowledge

PROJECT EXPERIENCE:

        The vehicle models which I am involved in developing:

             XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

        The suppliers (Interior&Exterior)  which I am in charge of:
  
2003.7-2007.5   XXXX CO.  LTD
products: WHEEL ASSY, STRG、 DOOR TRIM、 SUNVISOR ASSY、I/P PANEL and so on
  
2005.10-2007.5   XXXXXCO. LTD
products: GLASSES

2005.10-2007.5  XXXXX Company
products: GLASSES

2003.7-2005.10   XXXX CO.LTD
products: SILENCES & RUBBER, such as STOPPER. CAP .COVER and so on
　
2003.7-2005.10　XXXXXXXX  CO.LTD
products: RUBBER , such as RUNCHANNEL . W/STRIP and so on
  
2004.1-2004.10  XXXXX  CO. LTD
products: HEADLINING. SEATS

2004.10-2005.4  XXXXX CO.LTD
products: LAMPS

2004.10-2005.4  XXXXXXXXX CO. LTD
products: BUMPER . I/P PANEL
  
2004.10-2005.4  XXXXXXXXXX CO. LTD
products: CARPET

EDUCATION:

Bachelor of Science
(Material Chemistry )
Nanjing University of Technology & Science,China in 2003

COMPUTER SKILL：

WORD,EXCEL,POWERPOINT and so on.

carolgg

我回来澳洲找会计工作已经4个月了，还没有消息。申请低的职位，他们说MASTER学生和曾经在四大工作过，有点OVER QUALIFICATION.但是申请ACCOUNTANT ASSISTANT,他们又说没有LOCAL 经验。很迷惘，发出去很多简历和申请，基本没有回音。现在在一个会计师楼做义工。希望得到帮助。

Carol

Address
Permanent Resident: Australia
Home phone:
Mobile phone:
Email:


OBJECTIVE
To obtain a position that will allow me to utilize my accounting and communication skills gained overseas, which is the first step along a successful career path in Australia

SUMMARY

                Experienced in assisting in the daily accounting functions, such as general ledger oversight and control, and journal maintenance
                Experienced in accounts receivable and accounts payable
                Experienced in assisting in preparation annual statutory accounts, monthly and quarterly management accounts and other financial reporting for one of the top 3 property development companies listed in mainland China
                Good soft skill in building and maintaining good relationship with clients and team members
                Experienced in annual audits and group reporting audits, for companies listed in mainland China and companies with their parent companies listed in Hong Kong, America and Australia
                Competent at computer skills for preparing working papers, internal reports and external deliverables
                Experienced in using MYOB, Handisoft and Quickbook; good at Excel and Word.

EMPLOYMENT AND WORKING EXPERIENCE

08/2007~Present        XX Pty. Ltd.

        Trainee Accountant
                        BAS preparation
                        Tax return for individual
                        Reception and Administration work
       
06/2007~Present        XXX Tax Solution

        Trainee Accountant
                        BAS preparation
                        Tax return for company, trust and individual
                        GST reconciliation, wage reconciliation
                        Bank reconciliation
                        Analysis of reports
                        Journal entries
               
03/2006~04/2007        XXX Properties Development Co., Ltd., China
        Accountant
                        daily accounting functions, such as general ledger control and journal maintenance
                preparation of monthly balance sheet reconciliations
                involved in some projects budgeting and forecasting
                assistance with the audit process
                the calculation of income tax for individual staff and the company
                accounts payable and receivable
                assisting in the annual business plan and quarterly forecasts
                assisting in preparation of annual statutory accounts and other financial reportings
       
12/2004~11/2005        KPMG Huazhen, Guangzhou Branch, China
        Auditor
                collect information and understand the client’s business, industry, environment and its accounting policies and practices
                perform risk assessment and identify risks
                assisting with the planning and organisation of audits
                assisting auditor-in-charge and other team members to evaluate the effectiveness of certain internal controls over financial reporting, such as test of details of transactions and balances on trade debtors, sales etc.
                performance of substantive procedures on audit objectives relating to certain significant account captions
                direct communication with client staff on specific audit  issues and performing procedures to resolve issue
                preparation diverse audit documentations

EDUCATION

07/2007~Present        Certified Practice Accountant Program
Distance Learning

03/2002~07/2004        Master of Practising Accounting
Caulfield Campus, XX University, Melbourne

09/1998~07/2002        Bachelor of Engineering
        XXXX College, China

OTHER SKILLS

Computer Skills:        MYOB, Handiledger, Handitax, Quickbook, Microsoft Excel and Word, Powerpoint, Outlook etc.

Languages:       
                English: fluent
                Cantonese and Mandarin: native
Non-technical skills
                Effective time management skills and ability to work within the time constraints of financial cycles
                Good analytical, organisational and inter-personal skills
                Strong attention to detail
                Strong adaptability and willing to learn
                Work optimistically under pressure to meet deadline
                Customer service orientated


REFEREES

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leily

原帖由 william23 于 2-9-2007 23:58 发表

                               
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leily jj 偶是在9.1 月号政策前的, #333

不好意思，格我现在来帮你看。

leily

william,首先说明一下，我是IT的猎头，对于别的行业的简历改起来有隔靴骚痒的感觉。不是非常拿手，尤其是entry level的。。。


我的建议是调整一下你的简历结构。第一段写一下个人情况，

第二段就放你的社会实践。housekeeper的工作确实写上去没多大意思。和你找的工一点关系也没有，如果面试时为了表达你吃苦耐劳，也许可以提上一句。

第三段放你的教育背景。可以写的详细一点。比如你修了哪些课程，你发表了什么论文。毕竟你是社会新鲜人。

Career Objectives
Summary:        An entry level job with considerable opportunities for further development.
         
Education/Qualifications
Institution:                        xx University
City/Country:         Sydney Australia
Qualifications:         Bachelor of Commerce major in accounting
Duration:         02/2005-07/2007
         
Institution:         Sydney Institute of xx
City/Country:         Sydney Australia
Qualifications:         Diploma of Commerce
Duration:         12/2003-12/2004
         
Current Employment  

Australian xx Accountants Pty Ltd
Public Accountants & Registered Tax Agents
Start date:                 May 2007 (on going)
Position:                   Assistant Accountant (part time)(说白了是在volunteer )
Responsibilities:
·        Review of tax distributions and tax returns for clients
·        Prepare tax report for clients
·        Assist and facilitate communication with clients over their tax reporting requirements and queries                                    
·        Prepare company accounts for clients
·        Prepare tax planning and GST for small business
·        Data entry
·        Accounts payable
·        Answer phone

Referee: xx



Employment History

1.        xx Pty Ltd
Start Date:                        March 2007
End Date :                        June 2007
Position/Title:                   Customer Service Officer
Responsibilities:               
·        Service customer at check out
·        Customer service
·        Keep shop in a good presentation
·        Answer phone
·        Cash handling

2.        xx Marketing Group
Start Date:                         February 2006
End Date:                          June 2006
Position/Title:                   Sales
Responsibilities:   
·        Study marketing and interpersonal communication skills in the training program
·        Provide door-to-door service to promote the electricity contracts and customer survey

Skill Summary

Tax Return:                      Advance Sega Handitax 2007
Bookkeeping:                      Intermediate QuickBooks, MOYB
Computer Skills:         Intermediate MS Office

有一年的housekeeper 工作,但是一中介不要我写, 说你找accounting的工,写housekeeper的经练,rubbish
除了accounting的工作,对bank和finance的工作都感兴趣,不知道人家能对我敢兴趣不

sharonsharon

既然要400，那我肯定赚不了。简历是没法修改了，有一个问题还是想要请教一下，我的情况同127楼的同学一样，刚毕业，没有任何的会计工作相关经验。老大卫说打工做服务员的工作经验那堆可以直接删掉。那简历里面'工作经验'那一栏不就什麽也没有了？有什麽补救的办法吗？希望大家帮帮忙，确实是很无奈了，非常感谢。

carolgg

我在#374，请大哥帮我指导下好吗？我真不明白为什么我每天都收这么多拒绝信，一个电话INTERVIEW都没有。谢谢

leily

原帖由 carolgg 于 19-9-2007 22:04 发表

                               
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我在#374，请大哥帮我指导下好吗？我真不明白为什么我每天都收这么多拒绝信，一个电话INTERVIEW都没有。谢谢

现在单独修改只接受400贴以上或有精华贴的ID。

你可以把简历工作室的简历修改认真看看，你这种类型的简历蛮多的。

william23

谢谢姐姐, 我改改在看

laowantong

单衣纵酒，读书人&IT工程师&Chicken choper；
老兄强, 哈哈哈

leily原来是猎头, 枪发准

老大卫  找工爱好者:-)))

dejah

看了几乎所有的帖子，感觉很多都是IT或者accountant的，所以贴一个我的简历，希望大家看看能有什么修改的。

WORKING EXPERIENCE：                                                            
2003, July – Now: xxx (a listed company in HK)  
Manager of Group Internal Audit Dept.
Responsibilities:
·        In charge of auditing domestic constituent companies invested by xxx; ensuring the company’s system and internal controls can be implemented efficiently;
·        Making auditing plan;
·        Inspecting working paper to ensure the auditing work processed in the light of auditing plan and auditing program;
·        Analyzing potential managing risks and failings according to the working paper;
·        Inspecting and analyzing financial statement of each constituent company and evaluating financial work of them;
·        Discussing business risks and management failings with managers of each constituent company and proposing improvement suggestions;
·        Compiling audit report based on auditing result and render it to the general manager of company’s audit department;
·        Inspecting the improvement of business risks and management failings termly;

Achievement: This department belongs to xxx (a listed company of Hongkong) actually, as the head of the department, I need deal with all jobs in mainland of China, not only the audit job, but the daily management. Because of the extensive business of the company, I have the audit experience on steel, real estate, trading, packinghouse, electric power, internet game, etc.

1999, Jan-2003, July        xxx Certified Public Accountants ( this CPA firm has about 200 staffs)                       
Senior Audit Manager
Responsibilities:
·        Audit listed companies and work as item manager;
.               Issue the audit plan.
·        Arrange and review juniors' working paper, edit auditing reports,
·        Connect with customers

Achievement: As the team manager for the annual audit projects, I was in charge of about 8 listed companies in mainland China.

1996, Sep-1998,May        xxx Sdn., Bhd. ( a subsidiary of list company of Malaysia, worked in Kuala Lumpur and Sandakan)
Assistant of Accounting Manager and GM
Responsibilities:
·        Casher, Being accountant of subsidiary company,
·        In charge of Compensation & Benefits aspect and payroll payment for the company;
Make the finance statements.

Education                                                                        
1992.09-1996.06        Bachelor degree: Shanghai University of Finance & Economics, majored the accounting
2001         member of CICPA (Chinese Institute of Certified Public Accountants)
2007        memberof ACCA  (Association of Chartered Certified Accountants)
2007         member of CPAA

decei

原帖由 gexinming 于 2-9-2007 23:17 发表

                               
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今天终于尝到只看帖不会帖的恶果了。400分好像很难赚呃。

hahaaaaaaha

fred_au

老大卫，蕾蕾, 单衣纵酒, oea, qqyang，各位老大，你们都辛苦了。。。。。

我的简历你们帮忙改过了，非常感谢。
有兴趣的同志可以查找看一下。

我想说一下我的观点，我感觉这里的找工作最重要的就是match，如果你在国内有丰富的经验，那么就尽量找和你经验最match的公司，做好充分的准备，包括公司的情况，可能问到的问题，如何把自己的经验和公司的需求扯在一起，只要面试发挥正常，应该说希望很大。

至于刚毕业的同志，我就没有什么好主意了，其他同志有什么好的想法也分享一下吧。

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name

Mobile:                      Email:
Work Experience

Nov  2003 – Jun 2007
??????   Consulting Co., Ltd.   
Dept. Financial
Position: Chief Accountant
Duties:
•        Formulate financial accounting rules of the company
•        Formulate annual financial plan and annual budget plan
•        Manage and control fund utilization of the company
•        Prepare accounting sheet, prepare accounting voucher, accounting book
•        Calculate all taxes the company incurred, prepare tax declaration documents, handle tax declaration issues
•        Monitor and conduct statistical analysis on income flow and expenditure.
•        Conduct statistical analysis on company performance. Prepare financial analysis report
•        Prepare month, quarter and year end financial reports for  management, taxation bureau and statistic bureau
•        Manage financial documents, valuable papers, cash, check books, bill template and official seals of the company

Mar 2003 – Oct 2003
????????      Co., Ltd.   
Dept. Financial
Position: Treasurer
Duties:
•        Formulate financial rules of the company
•        Manage the cash flow of the company. Formulate monthly active fund plan according to the fund requirement of each department
•        Check company funds and confirm the status of bank deposits in due time. Check the authenticity of items in transit for bank deposit at the month end
•        Formulate monthly and yearly cash budget, control the execution of financial budget
•        Formulate fund financing plan according to fund requirements, monitor the application of financed fund
•        Analyse monthly fund status through financial sheet, analyse the effectiveness of company fund, formulate analysis report
•        Evaluate the financial risk of the company, analyse the ability to withdraw fund from receivable versus fund lost by bad debts from receivable

Oct 1994－Feb 2003
????????            Co. Ltd
Dept. Sales
Position:  Sales manager
Duties:
•        New client development
•        Maintain and support existing clients
•        Formulate new product development
•        Compile annual sales budget and monthly sales prediction
•        Produce actual sales result and statistics
•        Execute purchase orders. Monitor the progress of orders from production to product dispatch
•        Conduct data analysis and produce statistical data for payment withdrawal and supervisory control
•        Monitor the status of product delivery
•        Analyse sales capability using financial report

Education
Sep 2003– Dec 2005
Dongbei University of Finance & Economics
Majored in Accounting                      Bachelor’s Degree

Sep 2000– Dec 2003
Sep 1996－Dec 1998
Dalian University of Foreign Languages
Majored in Japanese                        Bachelor’s Degree
Majored in Japanese                        Diploma

Sep 1992－Aug 1994
Dongbei University of Finance & Economics
Majored in International Trade          Diploma

[ 本帖最后由 000 于 8-10-2007 11:11 编辑 ]

000

  zen me cheng le zhe ge yang zi la

whocanrecognise

感谢几位热心人帮大家修改简历啊,我才看到第三页眼睛就累了 我从中收集了自己需要的重点.我可不是本事那么大的人,哈,只想找个稳定工作生活 .我相信我能按照这些指点写出我自己的简历
谢谢各位!!

nana

这是leily耐心指导下的版本

请各位再给看看语法措辞及相关技术的表述是否准确

jdsh

感谢斑竹，热心人啊。一定关注。

黛少MM

我看了，发现我没有我的专业的简历，怎么办？

我是土木工程 ，道路桥梁专业  
civil engineer

怎么办？