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作者: jimraynor0 时间: 30-11-2010 11:01
标题: 死了死了……作文时间不够用啊……
周末就要考人生第一鸭了。之前一直在拼口语，看了些教程和范文觉得只要掌握结构作文应该不难，所以最近才开始试水作文。没想到真是太小瞧作文了……40分钟顶多能写一半……感觉就是没话可写，开头凑合凑合还能整出来，第二段写到一般或者结尾的时候就要卡壳了，更不要说接下来还有第三段……最后的结尾更痛苦，怎么着都会和第一段用词有重复。天哪……死定了呀……

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作者: salyu 时间: 30-11-2010 11:24
看看慎小嶷的裸奔法

作者: shan8006 时间: 30-11-2010 11:37
TM STREEC $ 俗称裸奔法，由以下Idea的首字母组成，每个idea又延伸到第二项idea方便记忆。
背得滚瓜烂熟后在考场上可以迅速通过下面的idea分析出正方或反方的素材。
T= Technology - Efficiency
M= Mind - Soul
S= Society - Crime
T= Time - Space
R= Right - Responsibility
E= Environment - Health
E= Employment - Competition
C= Culture - Population
$= Money - Fun

作者: shan8006 时间: 30-11-2010 11:45
虽然有裸奔法，但我的第一篇作文花了近两个小时才搞定，知道中文的想法了，用英文就表达不出来，光知道词汇了，不知道用哪个合适，看了很多范文，但真到自己写的时候，开头，结尾都不知道怎么编排。一句话要改个好几次才能表达出来。介词也不知道该用in,on,by，光背词汇没背用法，有些词组介词是固定的，或换一个意思完全就不一样了。例如benefit sth.，不跟介词是对。。。有益，若要表达从。。。获益就要benefit from sth.
不过楼主不用急，刚开始嘛，正常的，坚持每天写一篇，越写会约顺手的。刚开始写不出也可以参考点范文，翻翻词典看词组用得对不对，不用顶在那里自己跟自己强较劲。但以后要逐渐脱离字典和范文，你会发现每天都在进步的。

作者: jimraynor0 时间: 30-11-2010 11:49
我靠，真是太对症了，万分感谢楼上的两位，后进末学顿首百拜……

另外补充一个刚才搜裸奔法搜出来的某前辈的烤鸭心得，感觉正是针对我这种情况的，放在这里希望有同样问题的同学们能看到

http://edu.taisha.org/bbs/redire ... amp;goto=nextoldset

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作者: jimraynor0 时间: 30-11-2010 11:51

原帖由 shan8006 于 30-11-2010 12:45 发表

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虽然有裸奔法，但我的第一篇作文花了近两个小时才搞定，知道中文的想法了，用英文就表达不出来，光知道词汇了，不知道用哪个合适，看了很多范文，但真到自己写的时候，开头，结尾都不知道怎么编排。一句话要改个好几 ...

这个对其他人大概是很好的提醒，不过我已经没有时间一天写一篇了……我得一天写三四篇才行……5555……

作者: shan8006 时间: 30-11-2010 12:01

原帖由 jimraynor0 于 30-11-2010 12:51 发表

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这个对其他人大概是很好的提醒，不过我已经没有时间一天写一篇了……我得一天写三四篇才行……5555……

晕，你啥时候考试啊?
by the way 推荐一下裸奔法快速背熟，这可是原创啊。
TM （D）裸奔啦（streak,这是裸奔原词，发音相同，推荐楼主故意背错成STREEC，反正那字以后也不太可能会让你写，顶多在报纸上看到某某又裸奔了而已。），裸奔有钱（$）拿啊！
TM STREEC $ 就出来了，然后
Technology会促使efficiency
Mind思想和灵魂Soul
有Society就会有Crime
.....
最后有Money就会Fun啦

作者: jimraynor0 时间: 30-11-2010 12:03

原帖由 shan8006 于 30-11-2010 13:01 发表

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晕，你啥时候考试啊?
by the way 推荐一下裸奔法快速背熟，这可是原创啊。
TM （D）裸奔啦（streak,这是裸奔原词，发音相同，推荐楼主故意背错成STREEC，反正那字以后也不太可能会让你写，顶多在报纸上看到某 ...

哈哈……你们的创造性太强了……膜拜一下

我本周六考啊，12月4号的G类

作者: shan8006 时间: 30-11-2010 12:08
汗啊，比我还早。加油吧，实在不行背模板也是个好选择，毕竟练习时间有限，原创这条路很难走了。

作者: revstar 时间: 30-11-2010 12:10
估计LZ本次作文要黄

变通办法，抓紧看慎小嶷十天作文，能否通过真的就看RP了

实际上作文和口语的part 3是通用的

作者: salyu 时间: 30-11-2010 12:12

原帖由 jimraynor0 于 30-11-2010 13:03 发表

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哈哈……你们的创造性太强了……膜拜一下

我本周六考啊，12月4号的G类

时间紧的话，应该到各个论坛看看作文和口语的题目预测，慎小嶷的主页上也会更新最可能的10个题目，把模版背下来，要练写作文就照这10个题目写吧，实践证明还是有用的

作者: jimraynor0 时间: 30-11-2010 12:15
嗯，我也是想练习就练押题的题目，这样既做了练习又做了考试准备。再次感谢大家的建议，真是太有帮助了

to 10楼，对阁下的观点本人深有同感，要是你猜对了给你加分，哈哈

作者: shan8006 时间: 30-11-2010 12:17

原帖由 salyu 于 30-11-2010 13:12 发表

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时间紧的话，应该到各个论坛看看作文和口语的题目预测，慎小嶷的主页上也会更新最可能的10个题目，把模版背下来，要练写作文就照这10个题目写吧，实践证明还是有用的

真的哦，昨天还看了还没出，今天刚出来。12月口语和写作预测。
http://blog.sina.com.cn/ieltsguru

作者: perkysun 时间: 30-11-2010 12:44
我老公也在苦练作文啊

作者: houbeifang 时间: 30-11-2010 13:31
一天一篇大+小足够了，一周时间足够了。
字数别太多也别太少，逻辑干净简单一些，复杂了老外看不懂的。这个针对6分来说的。。。
审题一定要仔细，千万别跑题，紧扣主题。

1周的时间，方法正确，可以练到6分水平的。

祝好运拉。

作者: shan8006 时间: 30-11-2010 21:35
刚写了一篇预测的作文，真TMD难，正面理由一堆，反面怎么都想不出来，但题目必须 Discuss both views ，这次超时了，花了一个多小时才写完，知道你急着考试，发上来咱们共勉吧。

1 Some people think the government should pay for citizens’health care and education while others argue that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Answer:

In these day and age, health care and education are always the crucial welfare and has played an vital role in citizens' life. Some people think that government should be accountable for paying for that but the others do not think so. This essey will discuss both sides in this debate.

There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc. Indeed, there are increasing numer of wealthy citizens choose private schools and private hospitals as their relatively high quality of service. The health care and education soundness which sponsored by government has been wasted.

So, whether government should curtail or even eliminate the funds of health care and education? On the assumption that, people should pay all proportion for medical service by themselves, and there are no disease prevention (e.g. inoculation) or people should pay for that. On condition of that, the needy citizens would give up treating their illness or refuse inoculation due to the expensive fee. When a grave plague erupted, government would cost more expenditure and human resources to control this situation. In terms of education, if government eliminate the compulsory education, some people in poverty would choose working rather than studying, as a result, it may be create a vast amount of illiteracy.

In summary, the health care and education welfare is the base what citizenry can depend on for live in this country. Government should improve this welfare instead of making it obsolete. A country's citizenry reflect this country's status.

作者: wangfei4427 时间: 1-12-2010 10:43
In these day and age,????
There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. 不应该用respects.
For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc 有名词，形容词。应该是同一属性。

作者: salyu 时间: 1-12-2010 12:11
Answer:

In these day and age, health care and education are always the crucial welfare and has played an vital role in citizens' life. ....

There are too many respects that the government should allocates money to thereby keeping the society stability. For instance, city development, military, financial, society well-being, etc. Indeed, there are increasing numer of wealthy citizens choose private schools and private hospitals as their relatively high quality of service. The health care and education soundness which sponsored by government has been wasted.

So, whether government should curtail or even eliminate the funds of health care and education? On the assumption that, people should pay all proportion for medical service by themselves, and there are no disease prevention (e.g. inoculation) or people should pay for that. On condition of that, the needy citizens would give up treating their illness or refuse inoculation due to the expensive fee. When a grave plague erupted, government would cost more expenditure and human resources to control this situation. In terms of education, if government eliminate the compulsory education, some people in poverty would choose working rather than studying, as a result, it may be create a vast amount of illiteracy.

In summary, the health care and education welfare is the base what citizenry can depend on for live in this country. Government should improve this welfare instead of making it obsolete. A country's citizenry reflect this country's status

第一次看别人的作文，不说结构，用词，内容，纯粹基本语法错误....

作者: shan8006 时间: 1-12-2010 21:46
谢谢楼上的评价，可惜今天分都评完了，不能给你加分。
唉，这个语法现在也很困扰我，只能多看看范文和阅读找自己的毛病了。

作者: shan8006 时间: 1-12-2010 21:47
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3g网12/4日考试的预测，听力连续8次100%中，希望对楼主有用。

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