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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

What other measures do you think might be effective?
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It is evident that high price of petrol can push more people to the public transport and cut carbon dioxide which contributes to the global warming   . However  ，it will do little if nothing is done to prevent the tendency that use more cars.


The most significant factor that cause traffic jams and the decreasing standard of environment is more and more people can afford the car because of the development of the economic ,In addition ,the technology has been making the price of car minimised . As a result , cars have been a basic equipment almost  in  every family  which make huge congestion and air pollution  across the global.  Therefore , merely use the  initiate  of high price do not solve problems.


The long-term solution is the combination between technical program  and city designing . The emphasis of technology should be put upon the lifts of the fossil fuel efficiency and air filter equipment .These measures can be able to greatly cut consumption of petrol and reduce exhaust emission effectively. On the other hand , designing cities and neighborhood so that all the essential service being located within walking distance and the car travel not necessary . If all the destination can be easily accessible by the mass transport, the problems  of traffic jams and environment degradation will be solved radically.


Although increasing the costs of using petrol is only a useful method to slow down the tendency that more and more  huge congestions in cities and air pollution is becoming  serious , the long-term  solution is that technology which minimise the petrol consumption and designing cities  reasonable in order to  people  prefer  public transportation  instead of private cars.

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