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发表于 24-2-2011 03:07:49 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

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我的Reference Letter是利用了Ritz兄弟的模板(http://img.freeoz.org/ibbs/viewt ... p;extra=&page=1)修改的,感觉写的有点儿简单了,担心过不去,特烦请各位大佬帮忙审查下,提出些修改意见,这里先谢谢了:)

26 February 2011                                                                       
To Whom It May Concern,
This is to certify that Mr. XXX work as a senior developer/project manager at YYY from 1 July 2006 until now as a full-time permanent employee.  His annual income was approximately RMB ZZZ, including salary and bonus.
As a senior developer/project manager, XXX's duties and responsibilities include the following:
* Understand business requirements and assist project team with respect to architecture of the technical solution.
* Responsible for system analysis, design, develop and implementation.
* Work with other team members via code review and standard software development practices.
* Mentor less experienced developers.
* Document system design, concepts and facilities, present and obtain approval of detailed system design
* Develop, integrate, and support complex systems and modules, programs, sub-systems, system and procedures, analyse performance and tune system, and complete system document.

During his days at YYY, his major projects included:
1. FIX Adapted for STreaming(FAST) Converting Engine
The engine can flexibly convert binary data to FAST messages according to a template with XML format which defines the format of binary data and the structure format of FAST message and the relationship between the two formats. It can work under Linux and Windows.   
XXX's role and duties on this project were:
* Worked as a senior developer
* Analysed business requirements with the team
* Designed the system with the team
* Writed the codes
* Write the unit test codes
* Executed unit testThe software technologies used by XXX on this project include:* C/C++
* Boost library 1.42
* Redhat AS 5.4
* CPP Unit 1.21
* Microsoft Visual Studio 2010
* Microsoft Visio 2010
* XML

2. Quotation Forwarding System
The system works under Linux with a text user interface. It receives quotation data from China Financial Futures Exchange through TCP, do some necessary processing, then multicast it to subscribers through satellites and the internet. Also it can produce alarm messages to the monitor center if any errors or warnings happen.

XXX's role and duties on this project were:
* Worked as the project manager to manage the team and control the project
* Writed the regular reports of the statue of the project after collecting information from members
* Analysed business requirements with the team
* Designed the architecture with the team
* Writed the codes

The software technologies used by XXX on this project include:
* C/C++
* TCP, UDP
* Curses library
* Redhat AS 5.4
* Microsoft Visual Studio 2005
* Microsoft Visio 2003

3.Realtime Opening Account System
The sytem consists of the server and the client. The server runs under Linux with a text user interface, but the client runs under Windows with a GUI. The client collects data and transfers it to the server after doing some necessary processing through TCP. Also the client can receive data from the server.

XXX's role and duties on this project were:
* Worked as the project to manage the team and control the project
* Writed the regular reports of the statue of the project after collecting information from members
* Analysed business requirements with the team
* Designed the architecture with the team
* Writed the server codes
* Reviewed the client codes

The software technologies used by XXX fon this project include:
* C/C++
* TCP
* Curses library
* Redhat AS 5.2
* Microsoft Visual Studio 2005
* Microsoft Visio 2003

If you have any queries regarding this letter, please do not hesitate to contact me at <<推荐人email>> or <<电话号码>>
Yours truly,
XXX
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发表于 24-2-2011 09:04:11 | 只看该作者

回复 #1 zeopha 的帖子

看着还行。。。

说编程这块吧,尽量多写些工具的名字,比如VC,gcc,g++,MFC,STL什么的 ,不要简单的就写c/c++。。。以此类推
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 楼主| 发表于 24-2-2011 11:30:19 | 只看该作者
好的,谢谢大侠:)
对了,需不需要在开头或者结尾写上推荐人的职务呢???

原帖由 MillerYang 于 24-2-2011 10:04 发表
看着还行。。。

说编程这块吧,尽量多写些工具的名字,比如VC,gcc,g++,MFC,STL什么的 ,不要简单的就写c/c++。。。以此类推

[ 本帖最后由 zeopha 于 24-2-2011 12:31 编辑 ]
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发表于 24-2-2011 11:33:53 | 只看该作者

回复 #3 zeopha 的帖子

在结尾写上推荐人的职务就好了
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发表于 24-2-2011 11:41:06 | 只看该作者
我的reference letter才一张纸……
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发表于 24-2-2011 11:54:43 | 只看该作者
我的也很短
看看楼主的那么多字
感觉自己简直啥工作都米参与嘛
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 楼主| 发表于 24-2-2011 12:18:49 | 只看该作者
好的,谢谢!
原帖由 MillerYang 于 24-2-2011 12:33 发表
在结尾写上推荐人的职务就好了
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 楼主| 发表于 24-2-2011 12:19:52 | 只看该作者
唉,这都是模板的缘故,按照简历来写的话,项目还写不到三分之一页呢

原帖由 我爱polo 于 24-2-2011 12:54 发表
我的也很短
看看楼主的那么多字
感觉自己简直啥工作都米参与嘛
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发表于 24-2-2011 20:06:39 | 只看该作者
顶一下。

我的Ref. Letter一个2页,一个3页。内容差不多吧

目前正在焦急的等ACS,每天查几次,几次都是IP……
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