考场上我的作文好像是”TRAVELLING BY AIR ONLY BENEFIT TO THE RICH“,我当然是不赞同了,
我想起的分论点是:
1,air travelling as a fast transportation system boosts the society as a whole for increasing the social efficiency in all aspect of industries
2, air travelling as an industry offer many job opportunities to the poor
3, many air traveller are the poor, and they travelling by air for business rather than for themselves。
但是,考场上我对分论点论证不力,词汇替换也感觉贫乏。而且考场上字体很糟糕,写完之后自己都不愿意看,事实上可能字体方面的确不会对分数造成影响。另外拼写错误可能多达5处,单复数肯定也有错误。诸位还是要对自己有信心。