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成绩（A类）:平均6，听力5.5 阅读8， 作文5.5 口语5
雅思成绩终于出来了，套用大话西游的台词，我料到了故事的开始，但是却没有料到故事的结局。考完，我知道听力基本5.5－6，6分希望不大，阅读不低于8，对写作和口语也做了分析。我觉得我这次文章写得长，但是事后一想，觉得为了写长，因为时间不够，最后从结构上说，并不好。不然写短小精悍的小文章更合适，并且我在发帖子的时候，按照回忆大致写了一篇！大家觉得我那文章是5.5分的水平吗？联系一个筒子说他作文复议从5到7，估计我也是同样的原因——考官以为我背的！
口语，这个老太太果然够狠！我第一次雅思考试，发挥一塌糊涂，那个慈眉善目的大爷也给了我5.5，还鼓励我。第二次，小伙子跟我抬杠了半天，我以为完了，给了我6.5.我摸索了半年技巧，逮着老外就聊天，半年下来总有进步的吧，她奶奶的，她给我5分！果真遇到传说中的5分老太！
舔舔受伤的心灵，1月23跟同志们一起决战！
如果我遇到给我改作文的考官，我一定要问他：作文写得好是错吗？
这几天在出差，刚从呼和浩特颠簸到包头。真的让人无语的结局。
附：我的考场作文，虽然这个考后发帖子码出来的稍稍好一点，但是基本上区别不大，字数也差不多（我这次写得超多），大家觉得这个文章是5.5吗？
The 21st century has seen many changes not only in science and technology but also in our lives styles. Nowadays people prefer to purchase new products and throw the broken or even just old-fashioned ones into bin, rather than repairing it. This did bring us some awful impacts on environment. In this essay, I will discuss some of the causes as well as some feasible measures.
In order to stem this terrible tide, we should address its root cause. At the heart of the matter is the disputable fact that products become more and more cheap those days because of the process of industrialization, so the repair fee may cost you more than buying a new one which have more up-to-date functions. So consumers are driven to dispose their old ones and buy a new one. They just pursue a convenient life style and never ponder the inconvenient influence in the environment and in the future. It is easy to find a technician who offer repairing service a generation ago, but now it is difficult to find anyone who lives on repairing service in big cities.
Secondly but more importantly，it is the producer who promote their new products frequently and advertise it on the mass media such as TV and Internet and lure people to throw their old ones and buy a newly promoted one, encourage them to keep up with the Joneses. A research conducted by Tsinghua University reveals the striking fact that people at least have changed more that 3 mobile phones in some affluent cities in this decade.
In my perspective, it is Utopian to assume that this hard-nut-to-crack problem can be resolved in the predictable future. But it is by no means insurmountable. Firstly, the consumer should be educated and be encouraged to repair their electronic devices. Secondly, laws should be introduced to restrict the usage of some material and subsidy should be given to those who prefer to use environmentally-friendly material. Besides, manufacturer should responsible for the repairing service of their own products and non-government organizations also can organize volunteers to offer people with repair. This is really a complex problem, however, I believe that the measures I mentioned above will be a good first step.
[ 本帖最后由 timebirds 于 17-12-2009 22:56 编辑 ] |
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