再求助：CV这样写可以吗？

bigfootcow

Personal Information
Name:              XXX
Resident:           Australia (Permanent Resident)
Home Phone:        XXXXXX
Mobile:             XXXXXX
Email Address:       XXXXXX

Objective
Obtain a position at an IT professional company where I can maximize my communication skills, program development, and training experience.

Awards
1.        XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
2.        XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
3.        XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Professional Skills
1.        DBA: 6 years experience of MS SQL Server Series & Sybase Series
2.        Developer: 3 years experience of VB & Powerbuilder7, 4 years experience of .NET & C#
3.        System Deployment and Maintenance: 8 years experience of Windows Series (AD, DNS, ISA, Exchange, SMS etc.)
4.        Firewall Deployment and Maintenance: 3 years experience of Checkpoint
5.        Project Management: 4 years experience, the total budget up to 8 million AUD

Employment Experience
1.         2008.12 to 2009.8  XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX (Shenzhen, China)
Job Position: Manager of Technology Center
Achievements:
        Restructured the working process of technology center
        Established standards and coding classes of development
        Designed infrastructure topology of the website (www.XXXXXX.com)
        System analyst on team charged with designing and coding website application, such as blog, forum, album and other SNS functions
        Deployed all servers with windows2003 & MS SQL Server2000, over 30 which were lay in IDC

2.        2000.7 to 2008.11   XXXXXXXXXXXX(Guangzhou, China)
Job Position: Senior Software Engineer
Key Responsibilities:
        DBA: Managed MS SQL Server database server and Sybase database server
        Developer: Developed over 5 application systems by using VB, Powerbuilder7, .NET & C#
        Platform deployment: Established company’s computer technical platform by using windows series (window2003 advanced server, Active Directory Server, DNS Server, Exchange Server)

Achievements:
        Developed and deployed Advertisement System by using .NET & C# & 3-tie layers technology & MS SQL Server2005
        Developed and deployed Readers Information Management System by using Powerbuilder7 & MS SQL Server2000
        Designed and deployed XXXXXXXXXXXX System of XXXXXXXXXXXX by using .NET & C# & Sysbase12.5
        Installed and maintained Checkpoint Firewall System and VPN Technology Application
        Deployed and maintained mail system by using MS Exchange 2000
        Installed and maintained Netware Cluster Files Storage System
        Installed and deployed Active Directory Server and DNS Server
        Rebuilt the company’s LAN

Education
1996.9 ~~ 2000.6   Bachelor of Science
                 Major in Computer and its application
                 XXXXXXXXXXXX University, ranked top 10th in China

Interests
Basketball, badminton, travel, books and films

ADAD

楼上估计是中大的.

slevin

http://www.protopage.com/skillmax#Untitled/Bookmarks

bigfootcow

呵呵，LS的真聪明

阿土伯

怎么你的简历跟我的一样啊？怪不得我们都找不到工作。。。。

西澳海豚

ranked top 10th in China-----

这一点也要写出来吗？我只是提问一下～

另外～没有REFEREES阿？

BTW, they are not interesting in your interests ----

[ 本帖最后由 西澳瓶鼻海豚 于 21-10-2009 04:16 编辑 ]

desiderata

1.加Address
2. 把Education Background移到Working Experience之前

auatb

如果除了Job description之外，还有selecting criteria的话，工作经验基本上就应当有针对性地写。。。

auatb

“. 把Education Background移到Working Experience之前”
不同意，LZ显然已经有过正式的工作经历，应当首先把工作职责写得尽量与Job description相贴切，吸引看简历人的眼球。教育背景基本上做参考用，除非招聘广告上有特殊要求。要知道一个职位的应聘者可能有几十到几百个，HR 的人通常只拿着笔highlight职位关键词。

fierysteed

lz好牛

bigfootcow

没啥牛的，暂时还没有任何消息呢。这几天正在看怎样写achievement比较合适。
估计还是简历没写好。再过几天没消息，准备直接打电话去找中介看看

ritz

permanent resident 不用写出来，只会引来麻烦
要写家里的详细地址,  家里固定电话能写上最好，如果怕家里人接到中介电话讲不清楚也可以不写