求助老大卫等一众高人斧正我的CV。多谢！！

savusavu

周日聚会收获良多，只是十分遗憾没有机会向老大卫请教。坛里关于简历的帖子以IT居多，不才是做土木工程施工的，还请各位高人不吝赐教，感激不尽！
先把前日Seek上一个bridge engineer招工广告的内容要求贴上：
原广告内容 ：
position：Senior project engineer---Bridges
responsibility：The primary focus will be the supervision of bridge construction and structure problem whilst adhering to project planning and forecasting.
Along with construction supervision on site you will also expect to prepare status reports, develop JHA’s and provide your technical knowledge to junior engineers.
Condition: 5-10 years experience in bridge and structure projects.
Be familiar with concrete construction concept.
Advanced computer skill.
Most of all possess a genuine desire to succeed and accelerate your engineering career.

savusavu

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taotao63

我帮你顶，给我一份工作吧，房屋结构的，我给你画图