题目： 许多人认为电脑(computers)给我们带来的弊端(disadvantage)比优势(advantage)多，你是否同意整个观点，给出你的理由。
Some people blame that the computer has brought us more disadvantage than benefits, but i believe it benefited us more.
Some people suggest that the computers have brought us more disadvantage than benefits, they also point to that some of students in university use the computers play games for many hours almost every day, sometimes casuing their health. However they need to relise that they are forcusing on a small minority of people. Most people use the computers for their society and companies, they also use the computer for their trade. The computer makes them contact with their loved ones when they are studying, working or travelling abroad.
Some people also point out that the computer can be used for criminal purposes. For example, the identity theft is becoming a major problme when they are make purchase online, it also take place when people supply their confidential informations. Althought the bank and companies have invested a lot of time and moneny in security system to prevent problems. the identity theft also take place when the people make a response to their spam E-mail.
To conclude, the computer's benefits is denpending on the way we use them, we are surpposed to use them sensibly and take full advantage of the posibilities and benefits they provide.作者: symeteor 时间: 31-8-2012 13:59
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基本字数都不达标作者: mxria 时间: 31-8-2012 14:05
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************************************** Here is what I wrote:
Past few decades have seen an exponential growth in the availability of computers in our daily life. Yet, there still exists some dispute as to weather the overall effect of this new technology has been positive or not. I personally agree that the widespread of computers, if well managed, would engender much more benefits than drawbacks in terms of instant communication and informative contents.
For one thing, it is an irrefutable fact that the massive adoption of computers has fundamentally revolutionized the ways we communicate with others. Despite the risk of 'social isolation', a common phenomenon normally occurring amid those spending too much time sitting in front of a computer rather than involving in real social activities, most of us are largely benefited from that convenient and efficient communication methods when keeping in touch with our acquaintances.
Another aspect, equally important, is that computers could provide us endless information to cater for our different purposes. Academic writing, for example, more often than not, would be a time consuming task in the old days due to the lack of available resources. However, nowadays, assisted by computers, a researcher could be granted plenty of useful information and templates that would boost the efficiency and enhance the productivity. In spite of this, we could not deny that some basic skills, such as hand writing, would be influenced and experience recession if overly depending on computers.
By way of conclusion, I would reaffirm my position that given the massive adoption of computers these days, the positive points would be outweighing its negative aspects, if well organized and properly thought out, especially in promoting instant mutual communication and providing informative up-to-date contents.
