恳请大家帮我看看简历，问题到底出在哪里？
来了两个多星期了，简历投了大概有五十份，到目前为止没有接到过一个中介电话，只有几封客气的回信。我想问题应该出在简历和coverletter上了，所以我把简历和coverletter都贴上来，麻烦各位前辈帮我看看问题出在哪里，应该如何修改。拜托各位了:'(Resume
Position:Electrical Engineer
Career objective:
I am seeking a challenging position in an innovative, flexible organisation that will
allow me to use my excellent organisational and project management skills to their
fullest potential.
Summary of skills and abilities:
•Highly motivated and qualified, with 10 years of experience in management of maintenance and testing for electrical equipments,as well as technical documents and drawings.
• Ability to multi-task and work well under pressure, with minimal or no supervision.
• Well-developed research and analytical skills.
• High-level experience in field investigation on equipment failures.
Education:
2000~2004 Bachelor of Engineer XXXUniversity
Relevant training:
2004 Occupational Health and Safety
2005 High Voltage Testing Course
High Voltage Equipments Operation Training
2006 Generator,Transformer & High Voltage Switchgear Maintenance and Operation Training
2009 High Voltage Testing Refresher Course
2013 High Voltage Testing Refresher Course
Employment history:
Electrical Engineer
Sep 2007 – Jan 2015
XXX Power Generation Co.Ltd
Responsibilities
1.Write and develop maintenance and test procedure and strategies
2.Review contractor design for systems and design appropriate solutions where required
3.Review and monitor contractor installation standards and materials,as well as construction/commissioning schedules
4.Training of new technicians
5.Supervising the maintenance of electrical equipment such as generator/main transformer etc.
6.Managing the tests on HV systems to determine their compliance with appropriate standards .
7.Equipment drawing and ledger management, as well as collecting all kinds of technical documents.
8.Coordinating and communicating with technicians to complete and resolve both planned and unplanned maintenance activities
Achievements
1.Improved the reliability of the SF6 switchgears by developing a new strategy
2.Reduced the operation temperature of the carbon brush by developing a new strategy
Assistant Electrical Engineer
Sep 2004 – Aug 2007
XXX Power Generation Co. Ltd
Responsibilities:
1.Writing of equipment specifications and datasheets
2.Participate in equipment criticality reviews
3.Continuous improvement of ledger as well as updating technical records and drawings, and safety management of the team.
4.Carry out test and maintenance procedures,as well as safety instructions. 5.Field investigation and root cause reporting on equipment failures. 6.Purchasing, organizing and managing test device.
7.Providing technical support to the operation teams on all aspects of plant maintenance, closely working with site teams
Achievements:
1.Scheduled and organised 600MW generator AC withstand test by resonant circuit.
2.Top employee of the department in 2007
Referees
Mr XXX
Adress:
Phone:
Email:
Dear Sir/Madam
I would like to apply for a position in relation to electrical engineering.
My experience with the XXX power station in China has developed my knowledge and skills in electrical engineering area. This included HV test, preventive maintenance, troubleshooting and operation for equipments like generator, transformer and switchgear etc. In my previous position I played key roles in my team. I am familiar with high voltage devices like generator, transformer, switchgear, GIS substation,as well as low voltage devices like PC and MCC supplier. I have gained a broad of skills which I am able to bring to an organization to fulfill the role and responsibilities as assigned and provide assistance in any area as required.
As I have been responsible for dealing with maintenance and test for the units, I have developed excellent communicational and organizational skills,as well as an adaptable and flexible approach to trouble shooting problems.
With my strong background in the power generation industry,as well as my ability to relate to people at all levels, I believe I would be able to make a valuable contribution to your company.
My training includes a series of professional training provided both by the employer and manufactures, as you can see by my resumé,.I have an ongoing commitment to professional development.
I have attached a copy of my resumé and claims to support the selection criteria. I look forward to hearing from you in order to discuss this opportunity in further detail. I can be
reached on the above email address or telephone number.Thank you for considering my application.
Yours faithfully,
XXX 简历不知道，cover letter不用看都知道，不够细，不吸引眼球。另外，现在是大环境不好，不一定是你自己的原因。再另外，你太急，一份简历发出去，等2个月才有回信是很正常的。 写的太笼统别人没兴趣看。项目呢？工程师的简历就应该以项目为主线，每个项目下面说明你的职责和你的achievements。另外，你真的觉得突出强调自己的组织和管理能力合适么？我敢保证的是本地公司招这方面的人一定不会优先考虑中国人 买房子考虑的是地段，地段，还是地段。中国工程师的简历一样，技术，技术还是技术，先把你能干活的印象搞明白然后再说别的，别的里面也是沟通和团队合作排的靠前，谁在乎多少你的管理才能？请记住，你的title是engineer, not manager 牧马人 发表于 27-2-2015 14:11
买房子考虑的是地段，地段，还是地段。中国工程师的简历一样，技术，技术还是技术，先把你能干活的印象搞明 ...
谢谢指点，您的意思就是说要突出技术，把技术放在前面，然后沟通和团队合作可以淡化一些，对吗？ retirement 发表于 27-2-2015 12:18
简历不知道，cover letter不用看都知道，不够细，不吸引眼球。另外，现在是大环境不好，不一定是你自己的原 ...
谢谢，coverletter还有哪里可以改进的地方呢？能再说得详细点吗？ education和training放最后吧~如果有拿澳洲证书的~把证书编号写上~
skills要放具体的东西~把你的专业名词放上去~写到我看不懂为止~
工作经历~按项目写~攻克的技术难关~
对照JD~cover letter和简历要根据每个具体的职位调整~项目太多~就挑主要的写~也不要写太长~没人看~
还有你的行业执行标准~中国和这边是一样的么~？如果不一样~你怎么处理~ shanesjr 发表于 2-3-2015 11:07
谢谢指点，您的意思就是说要突出技术，把技术放在前面，然后沟通和团队合作可以淡化一些，对吗？
teamwork and communication skill跟management skill不是一回事儿，需要淡化的是后者 说些个人感受---
1. 中式英文严重，大概在中介那边就被砍掉
2. 简历版模明显，感觉是拼凑出来的
3. 建议找西人修改润色
专业部份我不熟，我就不瞎说了～
刚过来的同学，简历拿出手就大概像你这样子，没有什麽不对和不好
只是有很大的空间可以改进，写的更专业一些，最好不要让人从简历中看出你的国籍 西澳瓶鼻海豚 发表于 2-3-2015 16:49
说些个人感受---
1. 中式英文严重，大概在中介那边就被砍掉
一针见血啊！分析得太好了，我找个西人去修改一下。 牧马人 发表于 2-3-2015 16:19
teamwork and communication skill跟management skill不是一回事儿，需要淡化的是后者
好的，多谢了！ shanesjr 发表于 2-3-2015 11:09
谢谢，coverletter还有哪里可以改进的地方呢？能再说得详细点吗？
一是通篇I开头，二是一点不具体，简历就是简单的介绍你的经历，cover letter恰恰是证明你如何符合sc的东西，sc有几条，cover letter你就要写几条，每条都要举例。如果sc条数太多，挑最重要的五条写，调整好字体大小后应该正好满满一张。 去鬼佬的网站去看鬼佬写的简历，千万别看了一两篇就往里套，多看个十个八个的，就知道他们大概的行文风格和思路了，然后再写自己的 yeats_only 发表于 2-3-2015 11:33
education和training放最后吧~如果有拿澳洲证书的~把证书编号写上~
skills要放具体的东西~把你的专业名词 ...
1、skills里面要放上专业术语，比如各种设备？
2、工作经历如果按项目写的话，一般写一两个主要的足够了吗？每一个项目大概要写多长？
3.JD~coverletter是神马东西？哪里可以找到？
谢谢 shanesjr 发表于 2-3-2015 18:41
1、skills里面要放上专业术语，比如各种设备？
2、工作经历如果按项目写的话，一般写一两个主要的足够了 ...
JD，我想应该是Job description
cover letter就是你后面的那封信 学习:):):) shanesjr 发表于 2-3-2015 18:41
1、skills里面要放上专业术语，比如各种设备？
2、工作经历如果按项目写的话，一般写一两个主要的足够了 ...
1,当然要有专业术语~要不怎么体现你和其它行业的不同~
2,还是根据你申请的职位来啦~项目中用的skill满足申请职位的skill~
3,job description;coverletter就是随简历附的那封信~google~多看~再写~ yeats_only 发表于 3-3-2015 09:46
1,当然要有专业术语~要不怎么体现你和其它行业的不同~
2,还是根据你申请的职位来啦~项目中用的skill满足 ...
好的，这两天正在努力的改进中。谢谢版主大人！
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