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请大家帮我批下一下边这篇作文，这是我练习的第一篇作文，不知道能得几分，还请各位大侠不吝赐教。
topic evelopment in technology causes environmental problems. Some people believe the solution in these problems is everyone accepts a simpler way of life, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, along with the rapid developing technologies, there are so many problems that occurred such as air pollution, water pollution and so on. What can be done with this? people dispute this and some individuals suggested that some kinds of technological developing should be stopped because it would be enough for us to maintain a simple life, while others supposed that the pollution will finally tackled in terms of the technology development. I agreed with the later opinion
some people may says that without the invention of the car, there will be no air pollutions and even less diseases to human. however they have ignored the biggest profit from cars. we can use a car to go a so long distance in a short time. i can hardly imagine the life without cars. Maybe we will never taste the fruit from the north because of so long distance and so long time to travel, we will stay in one small place in terms of no tools for long way travel, further more some people will die because they could not be carried to hospital in urgent time. Compared with this, it is easily to know what is more important to us
on the other hand. There are so many private cars and other motorized vehicles which is continuing to creating air contaminants, obviously the pollution is getting much more severe than before. this is the adverse aspect following with the technology promoting and the increasing number of vehicles, hardly this can be avoid. but some use of the cars can be instead. you can go short-distance places on foot or by bike instead of using your car. this way can not only benefit your body but also protect the environment. meanwhile the government should also carry out some measures to encourage citizens to reduce the use of there private cars
all in all, to promoting the technologies is the right way to resolve these pollutions, but not the direct reason for this. we should also promote our sense of protect environment, avoid the abusive use of cars.
[ 本帖最后由 dxd008 于 12-1-2011 01:28 编辑 ] |
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发表于 11-1-2011 22:37:30
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